In Memoriam
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Comment from RodG
A very provocative title hooks your reader. We want to know who or what you are writing a memoriam for.
We learn quickly it is the Speaker's lost dreams.
Good metaphor of their being "bones"in a "mind's graveyard," buried and not to be exhumed.
Rod
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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A very provocative title hooks your reader. We want to know who or what you are writing a memoriam for.
We learn quickly it is the Speaker's lost dreams.
Good metaphor of their being "bones"in a "mind's graveyard," buried and not to be exhumed.
Rod
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Titles either tend to come to me right away when I'm writing, or I spend way too much time trying to think of one. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
