Miracles
a 3-6-9 suite21 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
I love this. It is an excellent poem for the contest. I do believe in miricles because I've witnessed a few of them personally. I like the fact you brought God into your poem without sounding preachy and related him to a DJ spinnnig out our requests. I love the way you worked it around the picture of the antique radio.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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I love this. It is an excellent poem for the contest. I do believe in miricles because I've witnessed a few of them personally. I like the fact you brought God into your poem without sounding preachy and related him to a DJ spinnnig out our requests. I love the way you worked it around the picture of the antique radio.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you, Beth, for the terrific review. Bill
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The media ether AM or FM delivers miracle stories frequently. Some of them are believable, others hard to accept.
At times, I believe fate over miracles. Thank you for sharing your thoughts
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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The media ether AM or FM delivers miracle stories frequently. Some of them are believable, others hard to accept.
At times, I believe fate over miracles. Thank you for sharing your thoughts
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thanks, Chan
Comment from John Ciarmello
I don't know if it's because I love your work and am familiar with your muse, but the symbolic message so delicately slipped into this piece inspires me. You are one of my FAVS, Bill. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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I don't know if it's because I love your work and am familiar with your muse, but the symbolic message so delicately slipped into this piece inspires me. You are one of my FAVS, Bill. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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You are so kind, John. Your consistent encouragement really makes my day. Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Radio is a fantastic invention and this communication alone has connected us with joy and also spread good and bad news throughout the world. I love my radio more than I do my TV. A poignant post Bill, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Radio is a fantastic invention and this communication alone has connected us with joy and also spread good and bad news throughout the world. I love my radio more than I do my TV. A poignant post Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from judiverse
Great entry, and best of luck in the contest. The radio analogy is great, and you carry it out with words like broadband, frequency, and A.M. and F.M. I like the idea of the heart having to be tuned in correctly. "I Am" is making things happen. Very ingenious. judi
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Great entry, and best of luck in the contest. The radio analogy is great, and you carry it out with words like broadband, frequency, and A.M. and F.M. I like the idea of the heart having to be tuned in correctly. "I Am" is making things happen. Very ingenious. judi
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you, Judi
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 3-6-9 Poem contest.
Music opens the heart and it's a good way to get inspired.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Wonderful entry for the 3-6-9 Poem contest.
Music opens the heart and it's a good way to get inspired.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you, Gypsy
Comment from Ginda Simpson
How true are the words you write. Miracles do happen frequently to those who keep their hearts open. Our favorite music, known as the presence of God, is played regularly on this channel.
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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How true are the words you write. Miracles do happen frequently to those who keep their hearts open. Our favorite music, known as the presence of God, is played regularly on this channel.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thanks, Ginda, for your encouraging review. Bill
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautiful image - is this yours, Bill? Your verse skilfully fitting with quirkiness and metaphor inspired by faith. This is a joy to read and a strong contender for the contest. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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A beautiful image - is this yours, Bill? Your verse skilfully fitting with quirkiness and metaphor inspired by faith. This is a joy to read and a strong contender for the contest. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you, Debbie. I have radio similar to this, but this one is from the internet.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your metaphor of the radio for this faith poem! (I think you should change the category to Spiritual). I liked the stipulation of "when our hearts are tuned in correctly," the "broadband belief" and finally the pun on God's name of I AM. And yes, He still hears and answers even if we don't always hear the answers. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Loved your metaphor of the radio for this faith poem! (I think you should change the category to Spiritual). I liked the stipulation of "when our hearts are tuned in correctly," the "broadband belief" and finally the pun on God's name of I AM. And yes, He still hears and answers even if we don't always hear the answers. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thanks for the boost, the kind review, and the advice. I did change the category.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is very clever, Bill and a sure - hit for the contest. I like your theme of faith and use of radio lingo. You are always so clever when you write. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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This is very clever, Bill and a sure - hit for the contest. I like your theme of faith and use of radio lingo. You are always so clever when you write. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
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Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you, Melissa, for the encouraging review. Bill
