Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

This is a cute writing. As a parent I enjoyed watching my children at play. As a grandparent, it's even more special watching my grandchildren playing and can very well be the best part of my day. Nice entry entry for this prompt.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025

Awe, thank you so very much for your sweet review and your very kind words. I appreciate the vote of confidence. And I agree with you completely

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

if this is true than you never watched me toying around. You know that I'm kidding, but I haven't heard from you, even though you posting posted thrice this week, the same as me but not having your comments to said releases had me wondering if you were bed-ridden, save for my review of a piece you released on the 15th.have been writing

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025

Awe, thank you so very much for your sweet review and your very kind words. I appreciate the vote of confidence.

You don't know who I am remember, this is blind. LOL

Comment from Colorado Owl

Excellent

So true! My best memories will always be of my children playing. Those moments come alive and sometimes keep me company in my quiet house. Thank you for your poem.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025

Awe, thank you so very much for your sweet review and your very kind words. I appreciate the vote of confidence. And I agree with you completely

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Yes, I can so identify with you sentiments in this twenty words poem for the contest. Nothing is more affirming than watching children play out their fantasies. Good luck, Ulla xc

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

well, if that isn't the happiest, most adorable thing I've seen in ages. What a precious picture! It ought to win a prize for, if nothing else, making people smile. Almost made me forget your poem.
Cute, cute!
looks like 5 baths coming up! :)

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

And LOL, yes, it looks like a lot of scrubbing to do. Hahaha.

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Exceptional

This is an Excellent poem from
So few syllables. Very nicely done. Your photo compliments your words well.i love watching children play. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks so very much too for the six stars. I am always honored by them.

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Not sure if it meant only clean children. Dirty ones may burn. Ha!

Great job here! Good luck in the upcoming contest, mystery writer of great talent.
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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

I really love this. I would always stay by the door when my girls were little I love to listen to their make believe playing, it warmest my heart. Good luck with the contest
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You have used your 20 syllables well
with a good topic.
-A very good message, imagery, and rhyme.
-It is important to share time with our children,
and I agree about being the best part of the day.
-A good entry; good luck!!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Jan-2025

You are very welcome.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

I agree. The other scene that brings my heart joy is watching kittens play. Take time to indulge by embracing the simple everyday things that we often take for granted. Great entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.