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34 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Your words travel down the page like a paint brush, leaving vivid moments with each thought you express and the illustration of changing the colors simply adds to the beauty. Very well done and definitely brimming with romance.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Your words travel down the page like a paint brush, leaving vivid moments with each thought you express and the illustration of changing the colors simply adds to the beauty. Very well done and definitely brimming with romance.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
This love poem, Crimson Sunbird, speaks to the relationship between the juicy fruit and the juicy fruit lover who is here to express his/her feelings on the subject.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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This love poem, Crimson Sunbird, speaks to the relationship between the juicy fruit and the juicy fruit lover who is here to express his/her feelings on the subject.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so warm. You really pulls me into the feeling of deep connection you're sharing. I love how you create a world with each stanza.
I can feel the warmth and intimacy between the lines. I especially loved the final line. Truly beautiful and heartfelt! Keep sharing your lovely work!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Your poem is so warm. You really pulls me into the feeling of deep connection you're sharing. I love how you create a world with each stanza.
I can feel the warmth and intimacy between the lines. I especially loved the final line. Truly beautiful and heartfelt! Keep sharing your lovely work!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Dopeless Hopefiend
Oof, I love everything about this. You presented it beautifully alongside the painting, structure, colors and flowers. Everything about it is deeply romantic, sensual even. Your love is portrayed as essential, natural through your beautiful metaphors that evoke a sense of cosmic connection and desire. The intimacy is palpable, from the lingering memory of a first kiss to the passionate whispers and sighs shared in bed. The final lines, oof. Indulgent imagery of "chocolate-covered berries," add a touch of playfulness and even more sensuality. Overall, it's perfect for a Valentine's sentiment, and I enjoyed every morsel of your creativity that went into this collaboration of color and poetry.
Thank you for sharing, good luck in your contest.
-D.H
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Oof, I love everything about this. You presented it beautifully alongside the painting, structure, colors and flowers. Everything about it is deeply romantic, sensual even. Your love is portrayed as essential, natural through your beautiful metaphors that evoke a sense of cosmic connection and desire. The intimacy is palpable, from the lingering memory of a first kiss to the passionate whispers and sighs shared in bed. The final lines, oof. Indulgent imagery of "chocolate-covered berries," add a touch of playfulness and even more sensuality. Overall, it's perfect for a Valentine's sentiment, and I enjoyed every morsel of your creativity that went into this collaboration of color and poetry.
Thank you for sharing, good luck in your contest.
-D.H
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a gorgeous valentine from the artwork right to the deep sighs or recognition.
Your images are delicious as is your presentation and I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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This is a gorgeous valentine from the artwork right to the deep sighs or recognition.
Your images are delicious as is your presentation and I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Thank you, Gloria, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Well, you sexy, sexy love poet, you! This just kept getting hotter with each stanza. Before I knew it, I was peeling off clothes because my temperature was rising so!! (Not to worry, the blinds were closed...)
Best of luck to you in the Valentine's Love Poetry Contest. This seems like an easy winner to me, not just because of the poetry itself, which was - of course - phenomenal, but also because of the presentation with the beautiful images and multi-colored fonts.
I tell you this often, but it really is true: You don't create posts so much as full-out masterpieces. This one is no exception. xoxox
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Well, you sexy, sexy love poet, you! This just kept getting hotter with each stanza. Before I knew it, I was peeling off clothes because my temperature was rising so!! (Not to worry, the blinds were closed...)
Best of luck to you in the Valentine's Love Poetry Contest. This seems like an easy winner to me, not just because of the poetry itself, which was - of course - phenomenal, but also because of the presentation with the beautiful images and multi-colored fonts.
I tell you this often, but it really is true: You don't create posts so much as full-out masterpieces. This one is no exception. xoxox
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you, Rachelle, I appreciate your exceptional review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
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Always my pleasure, Gypsy! xo
Comment from rspoet
Hello Gypsy,
A marvelous poem and entry for the Valentine Love Poem contest
filled with splendid imagery like a box of with tempting chocolates.
Love the crimson sunbirds and willow skin.
The art work and words weave a winning entry.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Hope the recent rains have helped with the wind blown pain.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Hello Gypsy,
A marvelous poem and entry for the Valentine Love Poem contest
filled with splendid imagery like a box of with tempting chocolates.
Love the crimson sunbirds and willow skin.
The art work and words weave a winning entry.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Hope the recent rains have helped with the wind blown pain.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Your opinion means a lot to me.
We are doing better. The Eaton Fire was 2 or 3 miles from my house for a few weeks. Luckily the fire is contained and further back. Thank you very much for asking.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a gorgeous Valentines poem. I love the scenes you have presented here. They are so romantic, sounds like a love melody, this is really special.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki xo
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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This is a gorgeous Valentines poem. I love the scenes you have presented here. They are so romantic, sounds like a love melody, this is really special.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki xo
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is an excellent Valentine's Day poem. It breathes with a passion so sweet only sunbird's nectar can be as sweet.
I love the descriptions of love's embrace and it is a sure winner as far as it covers everything involved with romance and love. May I suggest that it end with the word, You, instead of going on to mention chocolate-covered cherries tasting delicious when you are nearby?
It seems to be an addition to an earlier thought.
Well done and an excellent job.
Jesse
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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This is an excellent Valentine's Day poem. It breathes with a passion so sweet only sunbird's nectar can be as sweet.
I love the descriptions of love's embrace and it is a sure winner as far as it covers everything involved with romance and love. May I suggest that it end with the word, You, instead of going on to mention chocolate-covered cherries tasting delicious when you are nearby?
It seems to be an addition to an earlier thought.
Well done and an excellent job.
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 Jesse
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jaded831
I relished every word. Your poem is what love should feel like. Your words paint a beautiful picture for the reader. I haven't felt that kind of love in ages, your poem reminded me of that passion.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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I relished every word. Your poem is what love should feel like. Your words paint a beautiful picture for the reader. I haven't felt that kind of love in ages, your poem reminded me of that passion.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
