Loon
On the Lake16 total reviews
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
This poem is certainly a boon.
But seriously, it is indeed a gift of your talent which I am very glad you decided to share with all of us. Poetry and other arts, whether written or visual, are the greatest gifts that people can share with each other.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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This poem is certainly a boon.
But seriously, it is indeed a gift of your talent which I am very glad you decided to share with all of us. Poetry and other arts, whether written or visual, are the greatest gifts that people can share with each other.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Imaginos,
Thank you very much for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.
Comment from Mrs. KT
And what a "croon" they have, Mystery Writer!
Lived on Loon Lake in Hale, Michigan for two years.
Their call is haunting = I love it!
Best wishes!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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And what a "croon" they have, Mystery Writer!
Lived on Loon Lake in Hale, Michigan for two years.
Their call is haunting = I love it!
Best wishes!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Mrs. KT,
Thank you for the wonderful review. Their call is haunting.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Cecilia,
This is a nice mix of words and artwork for this mono-rhyme 1-5-1 poem.
It shows the sights and sounds we can look forward to in the warm weather of June.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
Enjoy the rest of your day and week.
Joan
P S I would like you to know I recently published my first book titled, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. I have provided a link to it at the end of my profile bio. I could not have done this without the help and encouragement of my fellow FanStorians.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Hi Cecilia,
This is a nice mix of words and artwork for this mono-rhyme 1-5-1 poem.
It shows the sights and sounds we can look forward to in the warm weather of June.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
Enjoy the rest of your day and week.
Joan
P S I would like you to know I recently published my first book titled, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. I have provided a link to it at the end of my profile bio. I could not have done this without the help and encouragement of my fellow FanStorians.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Joan,
Thank you for the wonderful review and congratulations on your book. I will check your book out.
Cecilia
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No problem, Ceclia,
Thanks for the interest in my book. If you choose to buy it, please let my know how you like it.
Joan
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You welcome
Comment from Angel Debbie
Loon
On lake middle of June
Croon
This is a great write for the contest and a beautiful bird picture compliments it. I wish you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Loon
On lake middle of June
Croon
This is a great write for the contest and a beautiful bird picture compliments it. I wish you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Debbie,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you my friend.
Cecilia
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Don't you just love the ducks, I enjoy feeding them all the year round and your magical post reminded me of home where there are plenty, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Don't you just love the ducks, I enjoy feeding them all the year round and your magical post reminded me of home where there are plenty, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Dolly,
Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so full of atmosphere! "Loon on lake middle of June" paints such a peaceful scene. And "Croon" ties it all together perfectly. I can almost hear the beautiful call of the loon echoing over the water. This tiny piece carries such a big mood - love it!
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Your poem is so full of atmosphere! "Loon on lake middle of June" paints such a peaceful scene. And "Croon" ties it all together perfectly. I can almost hear the beautiful call of the loon echoing over the water. This tiny piece carries such a big mood - love it!
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Michael,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.
Cecilia