Winter's Gift
15 Syllable Contest17 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Sometimes when the cold sets in that ice is merely frozen ice, but it does and is a great way of dispensing water in an efficient way, I think you created great imagery here Val, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Sometimes when the cold sets in that ice is merely frozen ice, but it does and is a great way of dispensing water in an efficient way, I think you created great imagery here Val, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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What a great review. Thank you
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Well done
Comment from Debra White
Hello Val,
I enjoyed reading your poem.
The imagery is clear and I love the theme of the seasons blending. Your choice of word ' nourishing' is perfect - so rich in meaning. I love the contrast between the colour silver in your words to the gold of the presentation - a creative and inspired presentation.
Best wishes and good luck for the contest.
Debra :)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Hello Val,
I enjoyed reading your poem.
The imagery is clear and I love the theme of the seasons blending. Your choice of word ' nourishing' is perfect - so rich in meaning. I love the contrast between the colour silver in your words to the gold of the presentation - a creative and inspired presentation.
Best wishes and good luck for the contest.
Debra :)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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This is such a well written review, Debra. Thank you so much, as they are rare these days
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your uplifting poem to welcome spring as the ice melts and the yellow glow of daffodils colour the scene, you scored with these few words here Val, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed your uplifting poem to welcome spring as the ice melts and the yellow glow of daffodils colour the scene, you scored with these few words here Val, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Interesting concept! I love how you wrote about the transition from winter to spring. Clever and very interesting to read. Best wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Interesting concept! I love how you wrote about the transition from winter to spring. Clever and very interesting to read. Best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Thank you
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent!! This is a well written poem for the challenge. Your photo image presentation is good, too. You use good rhymes and imagery. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Excellent!! This is a well written poem for the challenge. Your photo image presentation is good, too. You use good rhymes and imagery. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Thank you
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You're welcome!
Comment from Stacy M.S.
I really enjoy this short poem, but for the few words you give such a beautiful visual.
Winter is actually my favorite season. Your poem reminds me of how the icicles always melt along the sides of the mountains where I live.
And, the promise of flowers come Spring.
Beautiful work.
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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I really enjoy this short poem, but for the few words you give such a beautiful visual.
Winter is actually my favorite season. Your poem reminds me of how the icicles always melt along the sides of the mountains where I live.
And, the promise of flowers come Spring.
Beautiful work.
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you for this insightful review
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Val.
-You have used your 15 syllables well with a good topic.
-You create a good word picture of the scene.
-We see the icicle as it drips onto the daffodils.
-A very good closing line connecting the
icicle to the flower. Very well done.
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Val.
-You have used your 15 syllables well with a good topic.
-You create a good word picture of the scene.
-We see the icicle as it drips onto the daffodils.
-A very good closing line connecting the
icicle to the flower. Very well done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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As always, a great review. Thank you
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You are very welcome.
