Stealth
75 word flash fiction...15 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction writing prompt.
Your story of catching a mouse is well told.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction writing prompt.
Your story of catching a mouse is well told.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks much for reading and your thoughtful review.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Frogbrook!
Well done! Kudos for the story and kudos for capturing the mouse...although I believe in live capture, my husband surely does not. Your flash fiction is well-crafted as it is not until the very end that the reader realizes you are on the hunt for a mouse! Creative! thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Hello Frogbrook!
Well done! Kudos for the story and kudos for capturing the mouse...although I believe in live capture, my husband surely does not. Your flash fiction is well-crafted as it is not until the very end that the reader realizes you are on the hunt for a mouse! Creative! thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Poor mice, not too many people are fond of them but live capture is a great way.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Good flash fiction that keeps us reading and the end is good. I noticed no errors. I hope you do well with this entry for the 75-word flash fiction. Best of luck, Ana.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Good flash fiction that keeps us reading and the end is good. I noticed no errors. I hope you do well with this entry for the 75-word flash fiction. Best of luck, Ana.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks much for reading!
Comment from Wetbelly01
I'd say this is a great piece for this '75 Word' contest.
Didn't see any problems at all.
Very well presented, my compliments!
Good luck with the contest!
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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I'd say this is a great piece for this '75 Word' contest.
Didn't see any problems at all.
Very well presented, my compliments!
Good luck with the contest!
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for reading and the thoughtful review.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Sugarray77
You developed a fantastic 7 Word Flash Fiction entry. You set the reader up to think this is a horror tale, but noooo, just a creepy mouse. Well done and good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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You developed a fantastic 7 Word Flash Fiction entry. You set the reader up to think this is a horror tale, but noooo, just a creepy mouse. Well done and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for saying so.
