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Can sometimes lead you to a dark place.26 total reviews
Comment from Wils
A very clever write. You had me hanging onto every word and you ended with an excellent twist. Should do well in the contest. Good luck, now I need some pie!
Geoff
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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A very clever write. You had me hanging onto every word and you ended with an excellent twist. Should do well in the contest. Good luck, now I need some pie!
Geoff
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Make sure it's cherry! :) Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Ha ha ha ha ha! Clever! I did not see that coming! You have done an excellent job with this flash fiction entry! Thank you for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Ha ha ha ha ha! Clever! I did not see that coming! You have done an excellent job with this flash fiction entry! Thank you for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thanks for this starry review, it's always appreciated. :)
Comment from LisaMay
The suspense in your story was rather chilling and thrilling. Of course, you have led us to suspect the worst - that she is a killer - but then we discover the relatable 'crime' of breaking her diet with juicy cherry pie. Neatly told.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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The suspense in your story was rather chilling and thrilling. Of course, you have led us to suspect the worst - that she is a killer - but then we discover the relatable 'crime' of breaking her diet with juicy cherry pie. Neatly told.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this great review, I appreciate it. :)
Comment from pome lover
HA! very clever. I couldn't imagine, from the beginning, how you were going to end it so quickly. But indeed you did. And the picture looks so gruesome. Great picture, by the way.
Neat idea, well executed! Good luck in the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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HA! very clever. I couldn't imagine, from the beginning, how you were going to end it so quickly. But indeed you did. And the picture looks so gruesome. Great picture, by the way.
Neat idea, well executed! Good luck in the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thanks for this thoughtful review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from lancellot
Ah, a pie misdirection tale. Hmm, well, this is nicely written. You did a good job, making the reader believe something wicked was about to happen. The photo added to the misdirection.
Good... idea
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Ah, a pie misdirection tale. Hmm, well, this is nicely written. You did a good job, making the reader believe something wicked was about to happen. The photo added to the misdirection.
Good... idea
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thank you, that's very nice of you to say. :)
Comment from oliver818
This is nice and creepy- I like the way you build up a strong atmosphere but leave her actions to our imagination- it's very well done.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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This is nice and creepy- I like the way you build up a strong atmosphere but leave her actions to our imagination- it's very well done.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for this terrific review. :)
