2025 Favorite Poems
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Comment from shelley kaye
i like dawn's aroused by our embrace as our bed is ablaze...
vivid active imagery throughout each smoothly connected line
a great romantic valentine poem
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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i like dawn's aroused by our embrace as our bed is ablaze...
vivid active imagery throughout each smoothly connected line
a great romantic valentine poem
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Oh My Gypsy Queen!
This beautifully composed poem flowed from one delight into the next like liquid amber honey dripping from your thoughts and covering your lips with its nectar.
My computer is turning off and on, so I have to cut this review short... just know, I love this perfect presentation and wish you all the very best in this contest. For me, this is the winner!
With our thoughts we create...
the magical touch.
Kindest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Oh My Gypsy Queen!
This beautifully composed poem flowed from one delight into the next like liquid amber honey dripping from your thoughts and covering your lips with its nectar.
My computer is turning off and on, so I have to cut this review short... just know, I love this perfect presentation and wish you all the very best in this contest. For me, this is the winner!
With our thoughts we create...
the magical touch.
Kindest regards,
James.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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James, it's so good to hear from you 😊 Thank you for the six stars review.
I hope I win but you never know. I made a small change with the last stanza.
I hope you and Jade are well. We are much better. The fire is contained and the air is cleaner.
Computer problems can be frustrating, I am sorry yours is acting out. But no worries, I am just glad you read it ... and you like it. It's one of my favorites.
Besitos y abrazos,
MariVal
"The desire to reach for the stars is ambitious. The desire to reach hearts is wise." - Maya Angelou.
Comment from Neonewman
This is an excellent entry for this Valentine's contest. I especially liked.
crimson sunbirds crave nectar
our initials are engraved
on willow skin
Beautiful work, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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This is an excellent entry for this Valentine's contest. I especially liked.
crimson sunbirds crave nectar
our initials are engraved
on willow skin
Beautiful work, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I feel I read this contest entry yesterday. Did I forget to review it? Now I'm worried about myself. Thank you for sharing this very sensual and passionate entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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I feel I read this contest entry yesterday. Did I forget to review it? Now I'm worried about myself. Thank you for sharing this very sensual and passionate entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Gypsy,
This is a beautiful Valentine Love poem. It is full of passion and you can feel the heat in the words. You are a very talented artist.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Gypsy,
This is a beautiful Valentine Love poem. It is full of passion and you can feel the heat in the words. You are a very talented artist.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Wow, what a beautiful poem. I love every part of it. I like how you use different colors. The picture is beautiful and a great choice for your heartfelt words. Great job.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Wow, what a beautiful poem. I love every part of it. I like how you use different colors. The picture is beautiful and a great choice for your heartfelt words. Great job.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you 😊 I appreciate the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved the emotion in this piece and the yearning of this couple to be together as well as the memory of their first kiss. I loved the line "lingers in time." I think our first kiss is something we all remember. An excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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I loved the emotion in this piece and the yearning of this couple to be together as well as the memory of their first kiss. I loved the line "lingers in time." I think our first kiss is something we all remember. An excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you 😊 Jacob
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Such romance and passion here with beautiful imagery that transports and delights. The world is at your feet as nature and the sunbird unite with you in this Valentine love poem. I wondered if you intended 'dye' rather than 'die'? Good luck, MariVal! Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Such romance and passion here with beautiful imagery that transports and delights. The world is at your feet as nature and the sunbird unite with you in this Valentine love poem. I wondered if you intended 'dye' rather than 'die'? Good luck, MariVal! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you 😊
I mean die, as dying of envy.
Gypsy
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Oh sorry. I was fixated on the engraving:)
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No need to apologize, I understood what you meant.
Comment from royowen
Your great little poem is delicious in more ways than one, first of all one eats of the fruit ol love with all of its delicacy, and then chocolate coated berries, yum, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Your great little poem is delicious in more ways than one, first of all one eats of the fruit ol love with all of its delicacy, and then chocolate coated berries, yum, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you, Roy
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Welcime
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Aw! So romantic and absolutely sexy! I love everything about this. And the artwork is gorgeous. What an excellent presention. Thank you for sharing. I really enjoy reading and reviewing it. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Aw! So romantic and absolutely sexy! I love everything about this. And the artwork is gorgeous. What an excellent presention. Thank you for sharing. I really enjoy reading and reviewing it. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
