Nonsense Poem
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I had so much fun reading your poem! I love how you capture the chaos of being sick with such humor. The ending was a great touch. I thought it offered a bit of wisdom amidst the silliness. You've really nailed the balance between humor and the frustration. Keep up the fantastic work!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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I had so much fun reading your poem! I love how you capture the chaos of being sick with such humor. The ending was a great touch. I thought it offered a bit of wisdom amidst the silliness. You've really nailed the balance between humor and the frustration. Keep up the fantastic work!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much Michael.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the alliteration here and the inventive situations to make this very readable with a smooth flow and clever rhymes. You fulfilled the brief and this is a fine presentation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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I love the alliteration here and the inventive situations to make this very readable with a smooth flow and clever rhymes. You fulfilled the brief and this is a fine presentation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thanks so very much dear Dolly!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is an adorable poem using the 3 designated words from the writing prompt. I also love the chosen picture. Nonsense poems are some of my favorites because they don't take themselves too seriously and it was the perfect choice of poem for this weird prompt.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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This is an adorable poem using the 3 designated words from the writing prompt. I also love the chosen picture. Nonsense poems are some of my favorites because they don't take themselves too seriously and it was the perfect choice of poem for this weird prompt.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You followed the challenge and did a great job! These rhyming words with such colorful imagery, is funn.
I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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You followed the challenge and did a great job! These rhyming words with such colorful imagery, is funn.
I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much, Alex!!
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent poem my friend. It's perfect in meter, perfect in iambic meter, and the 11/11/11/11 syllable count works extremely, the narrative is language rich, if is a very good entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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This is an excellent poem my friend. It's perfect in meter, perfect in iambic meter, and the 11/11/11/11 syllable count works extremely, the narrative is language rich, if is a very good entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much Roy!!
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