Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

This is a beautiful and thoughtful cinquain poem. I love the artwork you chose. It is as beautiful as your poem.

Very nicely done.

Blessings
Janet.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hello Janet!

So pleased you enjoyed!

Thank you!
diane

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

So many more lives would make sense if the person had just one more person who really cared...looks like an excellent entry to a cinquain poem contest to me.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hello Friend,

So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!

diane

Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

Absolutely fantastic Cinquain, Diane. The shades of purple are majestic and your wording contains so much depth and calm.

I wish you all the best with this beauty.

Gloria

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hello Gloria,
So honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review...
I so appreciate your comments!

diane

Comment from Air Spirit

Excellent

Beautifully written... I looked at your picture first thing, and I just let out a lilting sigh.. so peaceful and serene... the words are simple, but ring so true.... we are what we make of our life --- either choosing to see the beauty in the moment, or the tragedy.. it is a choice.. thanks for sharing this lovely piece..

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hello Air Spirit!

So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!

diane

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Such a wonderful cinquain and so well written. I lost my husband a few months ago and I can relate to. So many wonderful memories to cherish...
I love the last part.
when all life needed to make sense
was us
Well done!! Fia

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hello Fia!

Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
I am so sorry for your loss...The last part is my favorite as well...

diane

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Awe, is this not just beautiful! Such a beautiful cinquain with a lovely love message within. I love the beautiful picture that accompany it. The words and the photo compliment each other so. Good luck All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hello Ulla,
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you so much!

diane

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Cinquain. Memories of a loved one while you were together enjoying a wonderful scenery. An excellent choice of art to complement your poej.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hello Sandra,
So pleased you enjoyed!

Thank you!

diane

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

Adrift, for sure love, true love give the feeling of being above where we stand and takes one to a to totally special safe place, love has its own place in life.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hello ronnie!
So pleased you enjoyed!

Thank you!
diane

Comment from N. Rabwar

Excellent

I like this poem. It reminds me of a different place in time when, I was young and in love. The image you selected complements the poem and the feelings it invokes is both poignant and nostalgic.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hello Friend,
Thank you for stopping by!
I am pleased you enjoyed my poetic offering!

diane

Comment from Mastery

Exceptional

Nice, Diane. What a wonderful thought you have captured and put into words here. I particularly like these words: "when all life needed to make sense
was us..."

Amen. I love your writing. :) Bob

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018

Hello Bob!
Thank you ever so much for your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
I am deeply honored.
I struggled so to find just the words I was hoping to express.
I am so pleased you enjoy my offering.

Have a wonderful week!

diane

reply by Mastery on 23-Apr-2018

You too, Diane. :) Bob