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Fright Night

Under a full moon...

4 total reviews 
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What A scary twist! I enjoyed reading this poem story with all the challenge words. The rhyming and imagery flowed and painted a picture. Your photo image matched well. I also love the word forlorn. It's become a family joke how much I use that word. Well dine!

Best wishes,

Alex


 Comment Written 03-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
    Wow! Thank you for the six stars...I'm very honored. :)
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 03-Feb-2025
    Well deserved. You're welcome!!
Comment from lancellot
Excellent
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Very nice. You have a great and consistent rhyme scheme that flows perfect with the tone and pace of the story. I like the double flash, with it being Halloween and the extra twist at the very end.

A winning entry.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
    Thank you, l really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Excellent
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What a fun twist you've created in your poem! I love how you set the stage - so peaceful - and then suddenly ramp it up with suspense as the glowing eyes appear in the dark! The tension is fierce! I'm right there with you - wondering what's about to happen! The surprise at the end with the Halloween theme is so clever. Your poem really brings the Halloween spirit to life. Keep up the fantastic work!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
    Thanks so much, lm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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This sounds like a Halloween poem for the contest with all the horror of a fangs of monsters on a moonlit night when trick or treating, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
    Thank you, it's so nice to hearfrom you. :)