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Can sometimes lead you to a dark place.26 total reviews
Comment from Susan L. Winters
Ha ha!....got me!
This is a perfect example, of flash fiction done well! Every word mattered and held the reader in suspense.
Thank you, that was fun!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Ha ha!....got me!
This is a perfect example, of flash fiction done well! Every word mattered and held the reader in suspense.
Thank you, that was fun!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
What a ride you took the readers on here! And a delicious plot twist at that! Well done in with this flash fiction! Six stars deserved indeed! Also loved the picture!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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What a ride you took the readers on here! And a delicious plot twist at that! Well done in with this flash fiction! Six stars deserved indeed! Also loved the picture!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you, my first attempt at flash fiction. :)
Comment from jessizero
This was a very good piece of flash fiction. It was purposely misleading, and you did an excellent job with that. The twist at the end was hilarious. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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This was a very good piece of flash fiction. It was purposely misleading, and you did an excellent job with that. The twist at the end was hilarious. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you, that means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Annmuma
I love it!!! I see you are currently holding 1st place in the contest and that is a deserved spot for this story. The imagery is really good and enhanced by the picture. Good luck and congrats! ann
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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I love it!!! I see you are currently holding 1st place in the contest and that is a deserved spot for this story. The imagery is really good and enhanced by the picture. Good luck and congrats! ann
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review... have a wonderful day. :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Now here is a tragedy worth experiencing in real life terms, though I'd likely have chosen Pecan pie instead, but then again there would be no red and that would have squashed using the picture. Great story.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Now here is a tragedy worth experiencing in real life terms, though I'd likely have chosen Pecan pie instead, but then again there would be no red and that would have squashed using the picture. Great story.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it's really appreciated. Pecan pie is good but I prefer peach...but that wouldn't have worked either! Thanks again. :)
Comment from T B Botts
Well done on your short, short story. I liked the way you led up to the finale. Of course I was expecting a little more gruesome scene, and perhaps if I was a member of the pie family, it would be horrible. Very enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Well done on your short, short story. I liked the way you led up to the finale. Of course I was expecting a little more gruesome scene, and perhaps if I was a member of the pie family, it would be horrible. Very enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Hahaha...thank you for this great review. Have a wonderful evening. :)
Comment from Wendy G
I like this as the twist is very clever. You have written it very well with intentional ambiguity until the climax at the end. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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I like this as the twist is very clever. You have written it very well with intentional ambiguity until the climax at the end. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this great review, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You really had me going with some awful thoughts on this story. Ouch! I sure hope cherry pie does not make you want to use a knife dangerously, like in the beginning of the story.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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You really had me going with some awful thoughts on this story. Ouch! I sure hope cherry pie does not make you want to use a knife dangerously, like in the beginning of the story.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reading. No, all that cherry pie does is make me gain weight! I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt contest. The word count looks good. You have a beginning, a middle, and an end as required.
Hahaha... that's funny. I like the twist at the end.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Excellent entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt contest. The word count looks good. You have a beginning, a middle, and an end as required.
Hahaha... that's funny. I like the twist at the end.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from BethShelby
This is excellent. I love your surprise ending. Of course, I thought this was going to be one of those people who seem to have an irrational desire to cut themselves. I thought she was cutting her lips. This is the sort of obsession that I would have if there was a cherry pie around. LOL
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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This is excellent. I love your surprise ending. Of course, I thought this was going to be one of those people who seem to have an irrational desire to cut themselves. I thought she was cutting her lips. This is the sort of obsession that I would have if there was a cherry pie around. LOL
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for this terrific review...I really appreciate it. :)
