Bringing Lunch Home
An Amanda's Pitch poem36 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the words to your poem, I thought they were very interesting to read.. I love the photo that you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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I love the words to your poem, I thought they were very interesting to read.. I love the photo that you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
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Your very welcome, stay safe and blessed
Cookie
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Your very welcome, stay safe and blessed
Cookie
Comment from Nottoway
Again, truly marvelous!
One can help but see this natural process of Nature unfold. And as the mockingbird so elegantly cares for his mate, one imagines the gentle rain falling upon the two as they sit together.
Beautiful imagery.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Again, truly marvelous!
One can help but see this natural process of Nature unfold. And as the mockingbird so elegantly cares for his mate, one imagines the gentle rain falling upon the two as they sit together.
Beautiful imagery.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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I'm so glad you could picture the birds like that. Thank you for a wonderful review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, it is certainly joyful to see that smiling face there again, my lady! And I will not ask nor will I dwell, but I will rejoice in the return of the beautiful pen of Yvonne... none like it round these parts! :) And what a lovely employment of this form: a mockingbird couple...so often overlooked but the jukebox of every garden everywhere!! ;) Thanx for sharing this evening and welcome back to both you and to your pen! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Well, it is certainly joyful to see that smiling face there again, my lady! And I will not ask nor will I dwell, but I will rejoice in the return of the beautiful pen of Yvonne... none like it round these parts! :) And what a lovely employment of this form: a mockingbird couple...so often overlooked but the jukebox of every garden everywhere!! ;) Thanx for sharing this evening and welcome back to both you and to your pen! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you for such a wonderful welcome back. What lovely comments. I appreciate you so much.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Strong alliteration used in this well crafted poem that paints a clear picture of a mockingbird wooing his mate then sharing his nest with her. Poem also depicts how well he takes care of her.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Strong alliteration used in this well crafted poem that paints a clear picture of a mockingbird wooing his mate then sharing his nest with her. Poem also depicts how well he takes care of her.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from Mastery
I can appreciate what you are feeling right now Yvonne, although you may not think so because everybody says something like this. However, I lost my son when he was 14 and still feel the pain after all these years. All I can say is take one day at a time. Then pain will never be gone, but will ease up over time. God bless you, my friend.. Bob
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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I can appreciate what you are feeling right now Yvonne, although you may not think so because everybody says something like this. However, I lost my son when he was 14 and still feel the pain after all these years. All I can say is take one day at a time. Then pain will never be gone, but will ease up over time. God bless you, my friend.. Bob
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thank you for saying that. It has to ease up. I can't go through life with this pain. I know you understand what I'm talking about, and that helps. Thank you so much. Your friendship is a blessing to me.
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Hi Yvonne. Sometime when you have time look at my inspiring story on this subject in my portfolio from about ten years ago. Called "Top of the mountain.
I aalso wrote a prize-winning poemabout Bobby..in my folio called "Constant Autumn." You may like that too. Bless you, my friend. If you ever need to talk...feel free to contact me. :) Bob
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Hi Yvonne. Sometime when you have time look at my inspiring story on this subject in my portfolio from about ten years ago. Called "Top of the mountain.
I aalso wrote a prize-winning poemabout Bobby..in my folio called "Constant Autumn." You may like that too. Bless you, my friend. If you ever need to talk...feel free to contact me. :) Bob
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Thank you. It's good to know I can talk with you anytime. That means a lot. I'll take a look at your suggestions.
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I believe you can google Constant Autumn. Bob
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I believe you can google Constant Autumn. Bob
Comment from TPAC
My regrets on loss, believing you being you what both would want, pleasing to see your write and touching expressions. We all have our loss. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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My regrets on loss, believing you being you what both would want, pleasing to see your write and touching expressions. We all have our loss. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne.
This is another of the forms I do not understand or use. The construction of this poem meets the standard of the style you are writing in. It is an interesting form.
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Hello Yvonne.
This is another of the forms I do not understand or use. The construction of this poem meets the standard of the style you are writing in. It is an interesting form.
Robert
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Robert.
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You're welcome.
Comment from harmony13
I didn't know about the loss of your son. I am so sorry and send
you my sincere condolences. I hope you will continue to write as it has
always helped me during difficult times.
The poem you posted is lovely, interesting and creative. It flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
May you have a good week and be well and safe....Maria
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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I didn't know about the loss of your son. I am so sorry and send
you my sincere condolences. I hope you will continue to write as it has
always helped me during difficult times.
The poem you posted is lovely, interesting and creative. It flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
May you have a good week and be well and safe....Maria
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your condolences and a lovely review.
Comment from Boogienights
I'm sorry about the loss of your son, he sounds like he was a fine person. I think it's good that you posted your poem, kind of like an honor to him. Thanks for sharing your story.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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I'm sorry about the loss of your son, he sounds like he was a fine person. I think it's good that you posted your poem, kind of like an honor to him. Thanks for sharing your story.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reviewing it. Much appreciated.
Comment from Susan Larson
I am so sorry to hear of your loss. I lost two sons. Writing has been my best outlet and my first entry on Facebook, Changing Times, was about the last conversation I'd had with him. My pastor asked if I'd like to chronicle my grief in the monthly newsletter, and that was a huge blessing. Keep writing, even if just for yourself.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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I am so sorry to hear of your loss. I lost two sons. Writing has been my best outlet and my first entry on Facebook, Changing Times, was about the last conversation I'd had with him. My pastor asked if I'd like to chronicle my grief in the monthly newsletter, and that was a huge blessing. Keep writing, even if just for yourself.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you for that. I'm trying to do something to take my mind off him constantly. Bless your heart. Losing two must have been devastating.
