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Remembering Yesterday

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A widow's journey into her relationship with her

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Comment from royowen
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For some reason I'm still not receiving your posts Beth, I love your biographical post, and I like to read because your struggles are similar, not the same but similar, you've managed to get out quite a few years, now in 1980, my elder child was born in 1979, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : on a(n) impulse

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm so glad you like reading my posts. I've been a fan of your for a long time but you just now popped up as my fan so you should be getting notices from now on.
    Beth
reply by royowen on 19-Nov-2020
    I thought I was a fan dear Beth, I'm sorry, I can be careless sometimes.
Comment from Sankey
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Once again a thoroughly enjoyable and informative chapter. I am enjoying reading about your family. This time around no spags to pick on anywhere. Good work.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and nice comments. I'm glad you could read int while it was still paying.
    Beth
reply by Sankey on 19-Nov-2020
    Yep glad we are getting them in time. May pay for December as well.
Comment from tfawcus
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Family history can be such a powerful means of grounding oneself and I feel sure that your family will thank you for recording this part of it. So often, what may seem like irrelevant minutiae to us, helps others to gain a better perspective on who they are and where they come from.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Thank you ro the review and thank you for understanding why I am doing this. I appreciate you reading it.
    Beth
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This diary of sorts grows on your readers. Your family now feels like part of mine, and I anxiously wait to see what happens next. The kids sound like they are happily adjusted to their lives.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Thank you Rebecca. I'm pleased to have you as a part of my family. The kids are adjusted to being in school but they are still kids at heart and they still make a lot of mistakes.
    Beth
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 18-Nov-2020
    So true!
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Beth, yet another, lovely chapter to your book. I loved it. As you you obviously must have been. I'm now worried about what Don might possibly be up to. Can't wait to reading on. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and comments.
    Beth
Comment from zanya
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Yes interesting insights in the life of the young family now growing up and establishing personalities of their own - a delightful time in the parenting journey

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review and nice comments. It was a delightful time but also one that caused a lot of concern.
    Beth
Comment from lyenochka
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I would worry about leaving a boy and girl teen all by themselves. But it's great that they all liked school.

My favorite part was about how you and your husband were so often on the same wavelength! That is so cool!!

Wondering about:
at least ten of fifteen times. (ten or fifteen times)
She was a single mom and [had?] only one child.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review and comments. Yes, leaving two unsupervised teen-agers together wasn't a smart idea. I knew my so n, because, he felt strongly about staying morally pure. The girl, not so much, He confided to me later about how she tried to tempt him into something more. He was very open about his feeling on those subjects. I wouldn't have allowed my daughters to go to a guys house unsupervised. Thanks for the heads up in the typos.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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How I love this story--every chapter jam-packed with great stuff. That wavelength business is astounding. (I won't call it telepathy, because then you'd have known if the other had already bought one!) Glad to know Don stayed with Ce-Ce despite the dean's efforts. I vividly recall the broken-hand fiasco. (Did they get married?)


hyphenate four-person-deep

[she s/b Carol (for clarity)] chose the latter

As long as our extended families were alive and well, we celebrated the main day with them [COMMA] which unfortunately made work for our parents.

She was a single mom and [HAD] only one child.

to the house, because [OMIT: she said,] Ce-Ce would be

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Thanks for the review and comments. I so glad you find this interesting. No Ce-Ce was just his first love. They parted after that semester. Thanks for the suggestions and typo help. I've fixed them.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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This is a chapter filled with so much of what your family was experiencing every which way. Your missing your children, and how you were keeping up with their activities. The bit about you and your husband buying the same things, just emphasizes what soulmates you must have been. It was enjoyable reading.

Ralf

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review and delightful comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
    Beth
Comment from Ben Colder
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Wishful six is all I have but I am here to say I really enjoyed this write. As always you bring me into a vast number of memories I cherish.
Don reminded me of my son Terry. The girls are so much like my girls as well. I had them all in private Christian schools and understand the depth of your story.
Well done my friend. Beth.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review. I'm glad I'm able to trigger memories of your own. I appreciate the virual six. I finally lost my number five slot. I'm surprised it didn't happen sooner.
    Beth
reply by Ben Colder on 17-Nov-2020
    As you know Fan Story is Bias. And they will promote him to the number one spot or close to it. Wait and see. I spend no more money with this site and could care less what they do. I have been here along time and if was not for you and a few others I would not was another minute here.