My Private Park
A Roger's Refrain poem29 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The picture is beautiful, Yvonne. I love the muted colors of it--adds a bit of mystery. You did an awesome job with your Potlatch Club response. Your words read well and create great imagery. I could see the happy little robin, the swaying trees, and gentle brook. This is one of your best nature poems.
Thanks for sharing a beautiful poem.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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The picture is beautiful, Yvonne. I love the muted colors of it--adds a bit of mystery. You did an awesome job with your Potlatch Club response. Your words read well and create great imagery. I could see the happy little robin, the swaying trees, and gentle brook. This is one of your best nature poems.
Thanks for sharing a beautiful poem.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank you for a wonderful review!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well done on this poem describing the picture. Your words bring to life your stroll through the woodland park and all the pleasant things you see and hear. Sounds like a great place to be.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Very well done on this poem describing the picture. Your words bring to life your stroll through the woodland park and all the pleasant things you see and hear. Sounds like a great place to be.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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It is. Thanks, Anne.
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You are welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Love it! Your perfect private park is a magical place that you share in your poetry. I can always recognize it by the peaceful feeling I get enjoying the happy creatures and flowing waters. Beautiful!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Love it! Your perfect private park is a magical place that you share in your poetry. I can always recognize it by the peaceful feeling I get enjoying the happy creatures and flowing waters. Beautiful!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank you. Welcome to my private park anytime.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' My Private Park ' , is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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' My Private Park ' , is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
You're very welcome.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Exquisite, Yvonne!
My husband and I have lived on our "acre of possibilities" high up on a bluff in northern Michigan for over thirty-four years. Surrounded by hundreds of hardwoods and pines, this place owns my heart as well as my sweat and tears. I am its servant, but I have always felt as if I was the "forest's guest."
Beautiful and moving imagery.
Delightful to read on this frigid day!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
P.S.
Lovely new profile picture!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Exquisite, Yvonne!
My husband and I have lived on our "acre of possibilities" high up on a bluff in northern Michigan for over thirty-four years. Surrounded by hundreds of hardwoods and pines, this place owns my heart as well as my sweat and tears. I am its servant, but I have always felt as if I was the "forest's guest."
Beautiful and moving imagery.
Delightful to read on this frigid day!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
P.S.
Lovely new profile picture!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I used to live in the woods on acreage and I still miss sit. Everything was so peaceful.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a good one, Yvonne. The meter is perfect with the exception of line three. What do you think about leaving out the word "were"? It's nice to have treasures that were passed down from grandparents.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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This is a good one, Yvonne. The meter is perfect with the exception of line three. What do you think about leaving out the word "were"? It's nice to have treasures that were passed down from grandparents.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I'll take a look at that. Thanks for watching out for me.
Comment from dragonpoet
Yvonne,
This is a wonderfully done Roger's Refrain for the potlatch. I exudes your feeling of peace and awe in the beauty of nature and its creatures.
You chose good artwork to go with your words.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Yvonne,
This is a wonderfully done Roger's Refrain for the potlatch. I exudes your feeling of peace and awe in the beauty of nature and its creatures.
You chose good artwork to go with your words.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you. You, too.
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No problem, Yvonne.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne.
Your story about the picture is wonderful. It gives the reader a warm feeling that such a treasure would be given so many years ago and preserved in your memory and words. You did very well in the construction of the poem.
Many months ago I wrote about The Seventy Year Old Angel. My grandmother gave that to me over seventy years ago.
Robert
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Hello Yvonne.
Your story about the picture is wonderful. It gives the reader a warm feeling that such a treasure would be given so many years ago and preserved in your memory and words. You did very well in the construction of the poem.
Many months ago I wrote about The Seventy Year Old Angel. My grandmother gave that to me over seventy years ago.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Tell where to look for that. I'd love to read it.
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Hi Yvonne.
Here is the link. Thanks for asking. It stood again this year.
https://fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=961851&userid=876425&tf=0
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Link didn't word for me. Tell me the title and I'll find it on your profile.
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The Seventy Year Old Angel
It is a couple of years old.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What a lovely poem, Yvonne. I can see why you would treasure the picture. I love your poem about the walk through the woods. The repeat lines are well hidden. Well done, Dear. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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What a lovely poem, Yvonne. I can see why you would treasure the picture. I love your poem about the walk through the woods. The repeat lines are well hidden. Well done, Dear. Nancy:)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you. Yes, I love the picture and look at it every day. When I was a little girl, I would imagine all sorts of adventures in the picture.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvonne, what a lovely poem accompanying the beautiful picture. I was with you on your walk through the forest and felt how you could be inspired to write those beautiful words. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Hi Yvonne, what a lovely poem accompanying the beautiful picture. I was with you on your walk through the forest and felt how you could be inspired to write those beautiful words. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much.
