The Miranda Chronicles
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Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great chapter! Miranda's Christmas scene with her mother-in-law was hilarious and her being Waylon's principal was genius. I always enjoy your writing, Gretchen. Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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This is a great chapter! Miranda's Christmas scene with her mother-in-law was hilarious and her being Waylon's principal was genius. I always enjoy your writing, Gretchen. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. Miranda is a fun character to write. Thank you for your encouragement. Gretchen
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Much better choice and solution: "but I'd settle for a cigarette and a beer." This is the way some people are able to go into denial, put the focus or blame on others. Many readers will identify with your dilemma. A fun ending.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Much better choice and solution: "but I'd settle for a cigarette and a beer." This is the way some people are able to go into denial, put the focus or blame on others. Many readers will identify with your dilemma. A fun ending.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for this entertaining and nice review. Gretchen
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***Smile***
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Waylon is impressed with Miranda so maybe, just maybe things will go a little easier for her, but naw, couldn't be. LOL I like this story.
you know me, then you know that I have a hard time keeping my mouth shut on a good day. (you can omit 'that')
Even though I can hear him, all i can do is think about that smug woman who had (capital 'I' needed on 'i')
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Waylon is impressed with Miranda so maybe, just maybe things will go a little easier for her, but naw, couldn't be. LOL I like this story.
you know me, then you know that I have a hard time keeping my mouth shut on a good day. (you can omit 'that')
Even though I can hear him, all i can do is think about that smug woman who had (capital 'I' needed on 'i')
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Barbara, for the awesome and helpful review. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
I think we've all felt like Miranda at times in our lives, everything out of kilter and surrounded by idiots. As a matter of fact, I feel like that most times. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I think we've all felt like Miranda at times in our lives, everything out of kilter and surrounded by idiots. As a matter of fact, I feel like that most times. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for this entertaining and kind review. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Serious progress is being made here. Miranda kept her wits about her just enough to be a wise-and-admirable parent figure, but also took leave of her senses juuuuust enough with the "big dog bad ass" [loved that description!] to still be her equally admirable Just Miranda self.
I take back everything I said in my last review. She (you) handled it just right. I was completely wrong. This was a masterful resolution to what happened with regard to the knife and the ex-MIL. Miranda was in no position to escalate. She stepped it back for Waylon exactly right and will live to fight it out victoriously later.
Another great chapter.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Serious progress is being made here. Miranda kept her wits about her just enough to be a wise-and-admirable parent figure, but also took leave of her senses juuuuust enough with the "big dog bad ass" [loved that description!] to still be her equally admirable Just Miranda self.
I take back everything I said in my last review. She (you) handled it just right. I was completely wrong. This was a masterful resolution to what happened with regard to the knife and the ex-MIL. Miranda was in no position to escalate. She stepped it back for Waylon exactly right and will live to fight it out victoriously later.
Another great chapter.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I promise you that Miranda will not hold back in future chapters. Lol. You are forgiven. But I like that you tell me what you think. Don't hold back. Let me know. Gretchen
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I promise I will. I know it's what you genuinely want. We're the same that way.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent chapter that I enjoyed very much. I liked the tension between Miranda and Elaine Buckley, but especially the fact that Miranda and Waylon have a common enemy that brought them closer together. Kate xx
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This is an excellent chapter that I enjoyed very much. I liked the tension between Miranda and Elaine Buckley, but especially the fact that Miranda and Waylon have a common enemy that brought them closer together. Kate xx
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Think the ice just might be broken now. Lol. Thank you for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
This was another great chapter. A real bonus. I do think Waylon is becoming fond of his Step Mom. Well done and keep it coming. No spags as far as I can tell.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This was another great chapter. A real bonus. I do think Waylon is becoming fond of his Step Mom. Well done and keep it coming. No spags as far as I can tell.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, thank you, thank you. I really appreciate your enthusiastic review and stars. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
I wonder whose voice it was, there are some girls that are magnets for certain men, that's true, from my experience that is certainly true. I love your style Gretchen, I always have, you genuinely have a way with words, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I wonder whose voice it was, there are some girls that are magnets for certain men, that's true, from my experience that is certainly true. I love your style Gretchen, I always have, you genuinely have a way with words, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Roy. I appreciate you kind review. Gretchen
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Most welcome
Comment from nancy_e_davis
all i can do is think about that smug woman[I]
you tell Sherrif Taylor that I said hey.[sheriff]
A couple of things I noticed. I love Marinda! She
Is a force to be reckoned with. I''m sure by now she has won Waylon over. She has fought his battle and he knows she is on his side now. You did a great job explaining your ex mother-in-law. Just perfect! Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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all i can do is think about that smug woman[I]
you tell Sherrif Taylor that I said hey.[sheriff]
A couple of things I noticed. I love Marinda! She
Is a force to be reckoned with. I''m sure by now she has won Waylon over. She has fought his battle and he knows she is on his side now. You did a great job explaining your ex mother-in-law. Just perfect! Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Nancy. I really appreciate this review and stars. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
I just keep being more and more amazed. You have created a true person (that transcends simple "character") with Miranda. She's the friend everyone would like to have watching his/her back, and the person you wouldn't want to cross -- ever! Waylon is seeing this. Elaine already has!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I just keep being more and more amazed. You have created a true person (that transcends simple "character") with Miranda. She's the friend everyone would like to have watching his/her back, and the person you wouldn't want to cross -- ever! Waylon is seeing this. Elaine already has!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Jay. Miranda and I share a characteristic or two. Not the boobs though. Lol. I really appreciate this fun review. Gretchen
