The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "The Watcher (Miranda)"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from royowen
How exciting, it's funny, but sometimes our discomfort bids warning of some other thing bothering us. So now Miranda has been feeling uncomfortable about something, even to the degree of warning Waylon, but now it seems there's something more pressing, also with a narcissist on her case in Missy Toblerone, they are quite often serial killers or dictators. Beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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How exciting, it's funny, but sometimes our discomfort bids warning of some other thing bothering us. So now Miranda has been feeling uncomfortable about something, even to the degree of warning Waylon, but now it seems there's something more pressing, also with a narcissist on her case in Missy Toblerone, they are quite often serial killers or dictators. Beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Narcissists are scary. No real conscience. I have been working with one for almost 10 years. I was on eggshells with her until I started studying her. Now she has no power over me but it's scary dealing with someone like that when you don't know what to expect. Thank you so much for this fantastic review. Gretchen
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Well done
Comment from John Ciarmello
Oh, No! Okay, I'm guessing it's not the perv because one would have to assume he doesn't have a car. On the other hand, Missy has the personality that she would have to approach rather than hide behind the dumpster. Hmm? Well, I'm just going to have to wait. Great chapter, Gretchen. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Oh, No! Okay, I'm guessing it's not the perv because one would have to assume he doesn't have a car. On the other hand, Missy has the personality that she would have to approach rather than hide behind the dumpster. Hmm? Well, I'm just going to have to wait. Great chapter, Gretchen. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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You just never know. I am planning on posting either tomorrow afternoon or tomorrow night. Thank you so much for this great review. I appreciate your comments. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is not good. I hope Miranda isn't hurt. I'm guessing they're being robbed. I can't wait for more.
tless and The Bold and the Beautiful?" He says with a flatness to his voice. (lower case 'h' on 'he')
"You are tougher than this. (In this paragraph there are a few 'you are' I feel with Miranda talking to herself, she's use 'you're)
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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This is not good. I hope Miranda isn't hurt. I'm guessing they're being robbed. I can't wait for more.
tless and The Bold and the Beautiful?" He says with a flatness to his voice. (lower case 'h' on 'he')
"You are tougher than this. (In this paragraph there are a few 'you are' I feel with Miranda talking to herself, she's use 'you're)
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Barbara for catching those. I really appreciate your candor. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Just like life. When you start thinking everything is okay, that's when it all goes to heck, or that other place. But I've already come to believe that Miranda can take care of herself just fine. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Just like life. When you start thinking everything is okay, that's when it all goes to heck, or that other place. But I've already come to believe that Miranda can take care of herself just fine. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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No real worries for Miranda here either. But you just never know. Great review. I appreciate your time and comments. Gretchen
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Peanut butter and Ramen, two things teens will feast on.
Miranda seems like she is getting a tad paranoid over events that are occurring.
She better get out of Dodge, pronto! before whoever is at the back door gets in the store.
Ending lends to curiosity about what will happen next.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Peanut butter and Ramen, two things teens will feast on.
Miranda seems like she is getting a tad paranoid over events that are occurring.
She better get out of Dodge, pronto! before whoever is at the back door gets in the store.
Ending lends to curiosity about what will happen next.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Everyone loves a cliffhanger. Lol. I've gotten a lot of grief over this chapter. Thank you so much for your awesome comments and review. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! A spooky cliffhanger ending! You gave us plenty to worry about for poor Miranda despite her very good pep talk to herself. I hope she has some self-defense ready or can speed dial Officer Mitch!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Oh no! A spooky cliffhanger ending! You gave us plenty to worry about for poor Miranda despite her very good pep talk to herself. I hope she has some self-defense ready or can speed dial Officer Mitch!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Thank you. My money would be on Miranda when it comes to a battle of sarcasm but who knows who this is. I'm so glad you're sticking with me on this. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh Boy, I hope she dials 911 and gets in her car and locks the doors till the cops get there. LOL I take it she is afraid of the creep. He was upset about the scissor incident. I don't thank she is afraid of Missy. If she killed Justin I suppose she could be upset because Miranda suspects her of it. Oh well. Good Job, Gretchen. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Oh Boy, I hope she dials 911 and gets in her car and locks the doors till the cops get there. LOL I take it she is afraid of the creep. He was upset about the scissor incident. I don't thank she is afraid of Missy. If she killed Justin I suppose she could be upset because Miranda suspects her of it. Oh well. Good Job, Gretchen. Nancy:)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Nancy for this great review. I'm glad you are enjoying this story. It's been a ride so far. Thanks for the six. Means a lot. Gretchen
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I am enjoying it. I like Miranda. Yes Sixes do mean a lot. Enjoy the Day! Nancy
Comment from Jay Squires
Well, I see I didn't miss too much with not reading the last installment. (I'm sorry, but I had to make some executive decisions on what I could read since I'm low on FS money and had to stick with promoted stuff or not post my own material. As good as a writing is, I can't afford to read it for 2 cents. Nothing personal.)
This was a tense chapter with Miranda being worried about something and rattled about the car by the dumpster, then calling and telling Waylon to lock up and not open the door for anyone. (Maybe I did miss something from last time!)
You got my interest, girl!
Jay
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Well, I see I didn't miss too much with not reading the last installment. (I'm sorry, but I had to make some executive decisions on what I could read since I'm low on FS money and had to stick with promoted stuff or not post my own material. As good as a writing is, I can't afford to read it for 2 cents. Nothing personal.)
This was a tense chapter with Miranda being worried about something and rattled about the car by the dumpster, then calling and telling Waylon to lock up and not open the door for anyone. (Maybe I did miss something from last time!)
You got my interest, girl!
Jay
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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I was ready to slit my wrists but then I saw you meant nothing personal. So we are all good. I do the exact same thing some times. I never have enough fanstory money to post very high anyhow. Just read and comment when you can. Thanks so much .
BTW, last chapter synopsis. Miranda holds a pair of scissors to town perverts crotch after catching him pleasuring himself in back by coolers. He runs out and cop shows up later to tell her pervert filed complaint against her. Then Missy shows back up and is insistent that she and Miranda pick up where they left off in high school. Miranda gets weird vibes from Missy. Now you are up to speed. Gretchen
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Gotcha! Thanks, Gretchen, for understanding. At my age, I have to do things differently to conserve energy. Some people would read what I said to you and think, "You should be paying me to read my genius!" Some never learn.
jay
Comment from Wendy G
Oh, your story this time gave me the chills! Yes she's a strong woman, but things are weird in her world right now. But why didn't she ensure the back door was locked as well? The dialogue is real, authentic and suits each of the characters. Well done, as always.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Oh, your story this time gave me the chills! Yes she's a strong woman, but things are weird in her world right now. But why didn't she ensure the back door was locked as well? The dialogue is real, authentic and suits each of the characters. Well done, as always.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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She had mentioned being paranoid to the point where she checked to make sure the back door was locked three or four times. Thank you so much for this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from damommy
Noooooo! You left me hanging. It's got to be whoever was in that car behind the dumpster. I'd be staying inside and calling the police. Hurry with the next installment!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Noooooo! You left me hanging. It's got to be whoever was in that car behind the dumpster. I'd be staying inside and calling the police. Hurry with the next installment!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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You might just be onto something. Or maybe she's overthinking. Anyhow, thank you for this great review. Until next time. Gretchen
