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The Miranda Chronicles

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Miranda solves a mystery.

12 total reviews 
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Fingerprints on a murder weapon could implicate her whether she is guilty of the crime or not.

So true about the news just making stories up, whatever sells the most copies truth or not.

Sounds like Miranda is about to uncover a deep secret.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
    Thank you so much for this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
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Between the cop, Miss Fine, and now Missy ... something's going to pop soon, I do believe. I loved your use of the line: "Her tobacco stained teeth look like crooked fence pickets." Yes, you do conjure up the images, Gretchen.
Jay


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
    You may very well be right. Something will pop very soon. Thanks for your continued support and encouragement. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I think Missy might be the person setting up Miranda, but...then I wonder if there's somebody, we know nothing about. I don't think it's Aaron because he's in love with her or Waylon, he needs her. Of course, her ex, but he's in another town. Her boss??? I doubt it, or the girl she works with, doesn't have the nerve. Of course, Mitch, but I think they might be a relationship growing. I do like this story.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
    My money is on Missy. But honestly, I can't second guess any of these characters. Thanks so much for this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from damommy
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It would be scary to be framed. Hopefully, it will all come out okay. Catch me up, please. Why does she think this woman might be the one who's framing her? Gotta like Mrs. Fine. lol.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
    She thinks Missy killed her (Missy's) husband who disappeared without a trace. Knows her from high school. Miranda goes by gut feeling. Has a bad feeling about Missy. Thanks for the input and nice review. Gretchen
reply by damommy on 13-Nov-2022
    Thanks!
Comment from royowen
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It sure looks like poor Miranda might be in trouble, but seeing it would be an impossibility for this particular character to commit murder, but the person she's meeting with is a possibility. Beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
    Thank you, Roy. Miranda is good at thinking on her feet. Just hope Missy doesn't catch on. Gretchen
reply by royowen on 13-Nov-2022
    I don?t either
Comment from lyenochka
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Sure sounds like good advice from the "old battle axe!" I was suspecting Missy all along but will Miranda be safe with Missy? Will Waylon be home or Aaron when they meet? Will Miranda meet Mitch afterwards?

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
    Miranda may keep this little "girl's night out " to her self. Thanks for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, Missy is the obvious one - but perhaps too obvious. Neverthelss it's not looking good for Miranda. Your story is engaging, and I am looking forward to seeing the next chapter - and who they bring up from the pond.
Wendy

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
    Never fear, they will return to the pond soon. Thank you so much for this great review. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Missy, Yes, That's who I was considering. Mainly because of the remarks Marinda made about her missing Husband. Or the missing husband, just to shut her up either way. I don't like Missy. There is a missy in every town it seems. Poor Marinda. She is being set up, but I think the Detective understands this. Well done, Gretchen. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
    Thank you very much, Nancy. I honestly don't know what's going to happen with Miranda or Missy from one chapter to the next. I'm just along for the ride. Lol. Thank you for the stars. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
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Another good, short read. Plenty of drama, still. I thought your chapters were usually a bit longer. Did you go through my re-lists I think you might have. No spags.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
    I did cut this one a little short but I didn't want to pad the scene just for length. And yes, I did read your work. Finally fanned you so I will get updates. Thank you very much for reading and your comments. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Now you've got us readers guessing who could possibly be trying to set Miranda up, but she has the perfect personality to set people off about things. Great chapter! Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
    She does rub some people the wrong way. Thanks so much for this great review. Gretchen
reply by Ric Myworld on 12-Nov-2022
    Don't we all rub someone the wrong way. And when I know that I can, I rub harder.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
    We may have been separated at birth. Lol. Gretchen
reply by Ric Myworld on 12-Nov-2022
    I've actually thought that as I've choked on my tongue laughing at some of your fine lines. LOL.