Ever watchful
Events on our planet provoke a response from nature27 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Wendy!
I have no idea how I missed reviewing your exceptionally well-crafted lune poem, but I suspect I was distracted by a very active two-year-old grandson!
Regardless, know for a certainty that your lune is moving and resonates deeply with me.
I appreciate the imagery of the moon being shadowed by sadness, and yet, a sliver of hope shines through...How I often step outside of our home and look to the moon for comfort... especially during these times.
Congratulations!
diane
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Good morning, Wendy!
I have no idea how I missed reviewing your exceptionally well-crafted lune poem, but I suspect I was distracted by a very active two-year-old grandson!
Regardless, know for a certainty that your lune is moving and resonates deeply with me.
I appreciate the imagery of the moon being shadowed by sadness, and yet, a sliver of hope shines through...How I often step outside of our home and look to the moon for comfort... especially during these times.
Congratulations!
diane
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you Diane, and congratulations to you too for a super win. I appreciate and value the six stars a lot. Very meaningful.
Wendy
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Wendy,
This is a very strong metaphoric poem that seems written for the picture.
It could be of the hope of the ray of light leading out of the darkness of doubt and depressions.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Hi Wendy,
This is a very strong metaphoric poem that seems written for the picture.
It could be of the hope of the ray of light leading out of the darkness of doubt and depressions.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for a thoughtful review, and for the congratulations. Both are greatly appreciated.
Wendy
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You are most kindly welcome on both accounts, Wendy.
Joan
Comment from Barry Penfold
Lovely entry and congratulations on your placing. Just love the image supplied with the poem. Could look at it for hours.Well done and have a great day.
Barry Penfold
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Lovely entry and congratulations on your placing. Just love the image supplied with the poem. Could look at it for hours.Well done and have a great day.
Barry Penfold
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, Barry, for your very kind words and taking the time to review a poem for 2 cents! I appreciate that a lot! Thank you so much for the congratulations as well.
Wendy
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No problem Wendy. Enjoy the rest of the day. Keep writing.
Cheers
Comment from Annmuma
WOW! What a picture so beautifully illustrated by your words. There is indeed always a silver lining in every situation -- though sometimes hard to find. Just a perfect post. Thanks for sharing it. ann
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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WOW! What a picture so beautifully illustrated by your words. There is indeed always a silver lining in every situation -- though sometimes hard to find. Just a perfect post. Thanks for sharing it. ann
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Ann! Ho wonderful to receive six stars, especially as it?s expired. I appreciate the honour very much.
Wendy
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this, Wendy, and a great entry for the contest. The use of the words "silver" and "sliver" are very effective. The moon has been so beautiful the last week.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Well done on this, Wendy, and a great entry for the contest. The use of the words "silver" and "sliver" are very effective. The moon has been so beautiful the last week.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Anne. Lovely review.
Wendy
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You are welcome, Wendy
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Indeed, there is a "sliver" of positivity in every situation.
Reminds a lot of the adage no matter what may be your lot in life build something on it.
Just like that "sliver shines" even when the overall picture is "shadowed".
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Indeed, there is a "sliver" of positivity in every situation.
Reminds a lot of the adage no matter what may be your lot in life build something on it.
Just like that "sliver shines" even when the overall picture is "shadowed".
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Brett for your thoughtful review. I appreciate it.
Wendy
Comment from lyenochka
Ah! A lune poem about the moon! And yes, even a sliver of light can bring some comfort in the darkness of sadness. Well written lune! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Ah! A lune poem about the moon! And yes, even a sliver of light can bring some comfort in the darkness of sadness. Well written lune! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Helen, for your lovely review and good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from Sally Law
Loving this lune poem in the silvery moonlight. Everything worked together in this super short verse poem to deliver an impressive entry. A winner here in my eyes. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Loving this lune poem in the silvery moonlight. Everything worked together in this super short verse poem to deliver an impressive entry. A winner here in my eyes. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Sal. A lovely response and a very encouraging one!
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much emotional meaning behind these words as even in grief we try and shine behind the shroud of sadness, much enjoyed Wendy, a very atmospheric piece, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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There is much emotional meaning behind these words as even in grief we try and shine behind the shroud of sadness, much enjoyed Wendy, a very atmospheric piece, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you for a super review, Dolly. Exactly right.
Wendy
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a perfect example of Lune verse, as the syllable count is correct.
You have captured the essence of this poetry style.
I appreciate the overall presentation.
You leave a strong message of positivity and endurance.
Poetry is a gift from the poet to the reader...
you give the gift of hope.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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This is a perfect example of Lune verse, as the syllable count is correct.
You have captured the essence of this poetry style.
I appreciate the overall presentation.
You leave a strong message of positivity and endurance.
Poetry is a gift from the poet to the reader...
you give the gift of hope.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this very lovely review - very encouraging!
Wendy
