Forever and a day
Our love will stay...7 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Sharon,
This poem uses nature to its full metaphoric potential to show true eternal love. It is very romantic. As is the artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Hi Sharon,
This poem uses nature to its full metaphoric potential to show true eternal love. It is very romantic. As is the artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much. I actually placed 2nd with two other people, which was unexpected and awesome. Thanks again. :)
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You are most kindly welcome, Sharon.
Congratulations on placing second.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever and skilful write with perfect metre and rhymes and well chosen words from a talented poet, a very touching love poem for the contest, love the repeated lines and sentiment, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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This is a clever and skilful write with perfect metre and rhymes and well chosen words from a talented poet, a very touching love poem for the contest, love the repeated lines and sentiment, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you for this exceptional review and for your kind words. You're very thoughtful. :)
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Well deserved, all I said is true x x x
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written love poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive and very heartfelt words. I love the imagery you used from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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This is a very beautiful and very well written love poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive and very heartfelt words. I love the imagery you used from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's so appreciated. :)
Comment from royowen
As you would be aware, repeating refrains need to be the very basis of the poem's theme, and this one does that in spades, this is a most worthy entry in this contest, a winner I'd have to say, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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As you would be aware, repeating refrains need to be the very basis of the poem's theme, and this one does that in spades, this is a most worthy entry in this contest, a winner I'd have to say, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you for this exceptional review. Coming from such a fine, talented poet like yourself, it's quite a compliment. You made my day! :)
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Bless you
Comment from susand3022
Hi Boogienights,
This is different from your usual children's poetry. An ode to love, it flows well.
The only thing to change, I think, is that the last line in the second-to-last stanza should end with a period instead of ... due to the fact that it is the end of the thought. With the others that do that, it's because they aren't complete without the next line. This one is.
A really nice poem.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Hi Boogienights,
This is different from your usual children's poetry. An ode to love, it flows well.
The only thing to change, I think, is that the last line in the second-to-last stanza should end with a period instead of ... due to the fact that it is the end of the thought. With the others that do that, it's because they aren't complete without the next line. This one is.
A really nice poem.
Susan :)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from BOO ghost
Oh, a love poem.
BOO'S favorite quatrain:
I gaze upon your loving face,
with you, I want to be.
Imprisoned is my very heart,
it's you who holds the key...
Hum, some people have iron hearts. You need WD-40!
Thinks there's a song by Krokus titled 'Our Love.'
Pretty good video.
BOOtastic!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Oh, a love poem.
BOO'S favorite quatrain:
I gaze upon your loving face,
with you, I want to be.
Imprisoned is my very heart,
it's you who holds the key...
Hum, some people have iron hearts. You need WD-40!
Thinks there's a song by Krokus titled 'Our Love.'
Pretty good video.
BOOtastic!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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I'll check it out. Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from nor84
very beautiful. Reminds me of My Love is Like a Red Red Rose by Robert Burns. I can't find anything wrong with the structure or rhyme, so I have no suggestions for improvement.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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very beautiful. Reminds me of My Love is Like a Red Red Rose by Robert Burns. I can't find anything wrong with the structure or rhyme, so I have no suggestions for improvement.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this great review. :)
