The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Truth Be Told (Miranda)"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
So Waylon things with his father back on the scene he will be forced to leave Miranda's house.
Miranda wants to help Aaron, but wishes to do so legally.
Plenty of action still to come in this and a mystery to solve.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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So Waylon things with his father back on the scene he will be forced to leave Miranda's house.
Miranda wants to help Aaron, but wishes to do so legally.
Plenty of action still to come in this and a mystery to solve.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this nice review and comments. Gretchen
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I could see the bond growing between Waylon and
Miranda, Gretchen. I hope it remains strong. She really
does care for him, and he cares for her, too. You did a great
job with this chapter. There were so many things to include.
I liked the discussion about the pond and submerged car.
Miranda was right to think to run it by Mitch first on the
possible plans to investigate it more. I liked the sensitivity
you used to show Waylon when he heard what Miranda said
about letting him stay as long as he wished with her rather
than that fly by night Dougie. I hope she doesn't give him any
money as she'll never see it again--throwing good money after
bad so they say. U could see Mitch and Miranda becoming an
item a few chapters back.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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I could see the bond growing between Waylon and
Miranda, Gretchen. I hope it remains strong. She really
does care for him, and he cares for her, too. You did a great
job with this chapter. There were so many things to include.
I liked the discussion about the pond and submerged car.
Miranda was right to think to run it by Mitch first on the
possible plans to investigate it more. I liked the sensitivity
you used to show Waylon when he heard what Miranda said
about letting him stay as long as he wished with her rather
than that fly by night Dougie. I hope she doesn't give him any
money as she'll never see it again--throwing good money after
bad so they say. U could see Mitch and Miranda becoming an
item a few chapters back.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I'm glad you are following along. Your review is awesome. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
An excellent episode, lots of things going on here, you've got my head spinning, what with Dougie, dates with sherrifs, bodies in cars underwater, and playing parent to a teenager and his young friend Aaron, good scribing Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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An excellent episode, lots of things going on here, you've got my head spinning, what with Dougie, dates with sherrifs, bodies in cars underwater, and playing parent to a teenager and his young friend Aaron, good scribing Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I feel like things are coming full circle now. The random stuff is starting to point in one direction. Gretchen
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When I got on FanStory today, I thought, 'I would really like to read about Miranda today.' Thank you for posting. I'm really attached to her. Glad Mitch is coming over, although not really a date.
He stands there looking like some baby faced man-child. (baby-faced)
Waylon is looking at me. (Maybe - Waylon looks at me.
"Yes?" I say, turning to face him as I sit down on the couch. (you can omit 'down')
"Thank you." He looks the pastry over with unbridled last in his eyes. (lust???)
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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When I got on FanStory today, I thought, 'I would really like to read about Miranda today.' Thank you for posting. I'm really attached to her. Glad Mitch is coming over, although not really a date.
He stands there looking like some baby faced man-child. (baby-faced)
Waylon is looking at me. (Maybe - Waylon looks at me.
"Yes?" I say, turning to face him as I sit down on the couch. (you can omit 'down')
"Thank you." He looks the pastry over with unbridled last in his eyes. (lust???)
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Hope you're in the mood for more Miranda. Just posted another installment. Lol. Thank you so much. Your review made my day. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I must admit, I'm glad Miranda didn't take the creep back, but in today's world, I know there is always a chance for her to give in and start the warped cycle all over again. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Well, I must admit, I'm glad Miranda didn't take the creep back, but in today's world, I know there is always a chance for her to give in and start the warped cycle all over again. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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You just never know. Dougie probably won't go away quietly. Thank you so much for this great review. Gretchen
Comment from damommy
I think she's wise to get Mitch to go with her. No telling what they'll find. I hope there's not a body in that car. Anxiously waiting to find out. Great chapter.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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I think she's wise to get Mitch to go with her. No telling what they'll find. I hope there's not a body in that car. Anxiously waiting to find out. Great chapter.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for this great review. Gretchen
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hi, Gretchen. I'm thinking Miranda made the right choice to get Mitch envolved. And when he asked if it was a date she never said it wasn't > great segway into deeper things between them. I'm lovin' this saga more each time I read. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Hi, Gretchen. I'm thinking Miranda made the right choice to get Mitch envolved. And when he asked if it was a date she never said it wasn't > great segway into deeper things between them. I'm lovin' this saga more each time I read. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Aer. Your review made my day. I appreciate your nice review. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
with unbridled [last] in his eyes.[lust]?
Love it!I like the idea of Miranda and Mitch dating. I think it's great that Waylon wants to stay with her and she likes having him there. They do make a good team.Good job. I look for your post first every time I sign on. I am enjoying the story. Well done! Happy New Year, Gretchen. Nancy
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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with unbridled [last] in his eyes.[lust]?
Love it!I like the idea of Miranda and Mitch dating. I think it's great that Waylon wants to stay with her and she likes having him there. They do make a good team.Good job. I look for your post first every time I sign on. I am enjoying the story. Well done! Happy New Year, Gretchen. Nancy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for this six. I am so happy you are liking my story still. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
This is looking good. I can't wait to see how the meeting with the cop goes. Your story telling is so good. Now just one tiny spag, this time. unbridled l[a](u)st in his eyes.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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This is looking good. I can't wait to see how the meeting with the cop goes. Your story telling is so good. Now just one tiny spag, this time. unbridled l[a](u)st in his eyes.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Auto correct must be a prude. I typed in Lust and it kept kicking it to last. Lol. Finally overrode it. Thank you so much for this awesome review and rating. I appreciate it. Gretchen
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is great how you keep the reader in mystery through the beginning. A great image: "I cock one eyebrow and place my hands on my hips. "And, I'm saying it again."
The ending will bring the reader back.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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This is great how you keep the reader in mystery through the beginning. A great image: "I cock one eyebrow and place my hands on my hips. "And, I'm saying it again."
The ending will bring the reader back.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much. Gretchen
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***smile***
