Tanka Collection
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This magical transformation has been brought to life in your few words here and I love the vibrant colours and the thought that has gone into this fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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This magical transformation has been brought to life in your few words here and I love the vibrant colours and the thought that has gone into this fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Dolly,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Love.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, a feed before flight, I love the word "tough" in this work as it would be a hard transition (one would think) very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Excellent, a feed before flight, I love the word "tough" in this work as it would be a hard transition (one would think) very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
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Kym,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from JT traveller
You are extremely artistic in your approach to your poetry and layout. As I have said before, it draws the reader in. Another great piece of writing. Thankyou
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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You are extremely artistic in your approach to your poetry and layout. As I have said before, it draws the reader in. Another great piece of writing. Thankyou
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Jacqueline
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is exquisite Gypsy, both in words and presentation. I love the caterpillar dreaming of becoming a butterfly.
Thank you for the image and the dream.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is exquisite Gypsy, both in words and presentation. I love the caterpillar dreaming of becoming a butterfly.
Thank you for the image and the dream.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Cherish Adams
Thank you for sharing your beautiful writings. I really enjoy them. I find this one exceptional and personal. Thank you for including helpful information regarding different poetic forms. You're educating me. I love that. Well written.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful writings. I really enjoy them. I find this one exceptional and personal. Thank you for including helpful information regarding different poetic forms. You're educating me. I love that. Well written.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Kaiku
Do you provide a class in presentation. Just sharing with another writer your marvelous methods of showcasing your work. Really, very nice. Such a connection as is shown in Caterpillar.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Do you provide a class in presentation. Just sharing with another writer your marvelous methods of showcasing your work. Really, very nice. Such a connection as is shown in Caterpillar.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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I used to teach haiku classes in fanstory but now I don't have the time.
Thank you very much for your time , kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
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certainly
Comment from royowen
What a beautiful Caterpillar Gypsy. It's amazing that these wonderful creatures can transfer themselves to eithrt a moth, or a lovely butterfly, well done my friend, blessings Roy
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What a beautiful Caterpillar Gypsy. It's amazing that these wonderful creatures can transfer themselves to eithrt a moth, or a lovely butterfly, well done my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time , kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, caterpillars are interesting creatures. They eat, they become chrysalis, and turn into magnificent butterflies. Your poem is equally as beautiful. Once again you prepared a wonderful package for our enjoyment. Thank you.
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Yes, caterpillars are interesting creatures. They eat, they become chrysalis, and turn into magnificent butterflies. Your poem is equally as beautiful. Once again you prepared a wonderful package for our enjoyment. Thank you.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time , kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful tanka, Gypsy. I loved the dual pictures. The cute little caterpillar and the wonderful blue butterfly. I really enjoyed your words of the tanka. There was definitely a transformation going on. Blessed be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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What a beautiful tanka, Gypsy. I loved the dual pictures. The cute little caterpillar and the wonderful blue butterfly. I really enjoyed your words of the tanka. There was definitely a transformation going on. Blessed be n Hugs!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time , kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Great writing. It goes very deep. I needed to read this today. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this. In an odd way it relates to the poem I just posted, called BUBBLE. GOOD luck. Write on. Did not have 6's. It deserves a six.
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Great writing. It goes very deep. I needed to read this today. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this. In an odd way it relates to the poem I just posted, called BUBBLE. GOOD luck. Write on. Did not have 6's. It deserves a six.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time , kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
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YW. My pleasure
