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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very beautifully written poem. It has a striking overall presentation. Nice font colour and background. Beautiful photos to compliment your words as well.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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This is a very beautifully written poem. It has a striking overall presentation. Nice font colour and background. Beautiful photos to compliment your words as well.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
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Your welcome
Comment from Mark Schardine
Nothing gives us greater joy than loving and being loved. We wish it would never end, and in truth the memories will return again and again to give us joy in the future.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Nothing gives us greater joy than loving and being loved. We wish it would never end, and in truth the memories will return again and again to give us joy in the future.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Mark
Gypsy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Very lovely poem and image. Your presentation is so romantic, unique. Did this bring back memories of your loved one? If you enter this poem in the contest, good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Very lovely poem and image. Your presentation is so romantic, unique. Did this bring back memories of your loved one? If you enter this poem in the contest, good luck.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Yes, I wrote it thinking about my ex-husband before the problems came.
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars, review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
I never knew their were so many types of Japanese poetry. I knew of only the haiku and tanka. This is a longer form.
I like the passion in this and that the font is red which is the color of love and passion.
Keep writing stay healthy.
joan
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Hi MariVal,
I never knew their were so many types of Japanese poetry. I knew of only the haiku and tanka. This is a longer form.
I like the passion in this and that the font is red which is the color of love and passion.
Keep writing stay healthy.
joan
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Yes, there are hundreds of Japanese poetic forms. I try to cover most of them in my Japanese poetry club. :)
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, I really appreciate it.
Gypsy
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Thanks for heafong the two clubs.
You?re welcome.
Joan
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I am shocked, SHOCKED I tell you! Such raw sexuality; I don't know if you can see me, but I'm one red-faced boy (not really!)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I am shocked, SHOCKED I tell you! Such raw sexuality; I don't know if you can see me, but I'm one red-faced boy (not really!)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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LoL sorry I made you blush :)
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, I really appreciate it.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Your presentation is always first class, with the font colour always clear and matching with the favourite back base, which is always a good pelvic floor for your fabulous poetry, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Your presentation is always first class, with the font colour always clear and matching with the favourite back base, which is always a good pelvic floor for your fabulous poetry, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy. It's always good to hear from you. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
The added references to the scents helped sure up the passion with this poem. It's very sensual, yet very innocent at the same time. I enjoyed reading and the artwork fit perfectly.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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The added references to the scents helped sure up the passion with this poem. It's very sensual, yet very innocent at the same time. I enjoyed reading and the artwork fit perfectly.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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It means a lot coming from a fine author as yourself. Thank you very much, Barbara. It's always good to hear from you. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sensual and rather naughty write and there is no doubt as to what is going on here between this loving couple, a red hot, passionate write for sure, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This is a sensual and rather naughty write and there is no doubt as to what is going on here between this loving couple, a red hot, passionate write for sure, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Dolly. It's always good to hear from you. Have a wonderful day. xoxo
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Comment from lyenochka
There certainly is a lot of passion in this poem. I wasn't sure what a "millennium dance" was. But I liked the reference to smells even if I find colognes too much. I think there is a type of Old Spice called "Sea breeze."
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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There certainly is a lot of passion in this poem. I wasn't sure what a "millennium dance" was. But I liked the reference to smells even if I find colognes too much. I think there is a type of Old Spice called "Sea breeze."
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Old Spice is a cologne my husband liked, I liked it on him. The millennium dance is making love. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, big sister. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well this was an erotic little piece of special. I loved the color scheme. You are a master at lining up the perfect tones for what you are saying.
Cold shower time!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Well this was an erotic little piece of special. I loved the color scheme. You are a master at lining up the perfect tones for what you are saying.
Cold shower time!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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LoL. I didn't think about adding a warning. Thank you for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
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