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Viewing comments for Chapter 140 "Rhapsody in Blue"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Ulla
Oh, Marival, what a beautiful tanka poem about such a deep love which has been taken away from him. I wish I had a six as it so much deserves. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Oh, Marival, what a beautiful tanka poem about such a deep love which has been taken away from him. I wish I had a six as it so much deserves. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Gracias guapa, I appreciate your kind review. It's good to hear from you.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from w.j.debi
Rhapsody in Blue is one of my favorite pieces of music so you had my attention with the title.I have the sheet music and one of these days I may even tackle it.
Your poem, however, takes the music in a new direction for me. Rage and grief are strong emotions. But it is a strong piece of music and I can see the relationship you make with the emotions and the music.
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Rhapsody in Blue is one of my favorite pieces of music so you had my attention with the title.I have the sheet music and one of these days I may even tackle it.
Your poem, however, takes the music in a new direction for me. Rage and grief are strong emotions. But it is a strong piece of music and I can see the relationship you make with the emotions and the music.
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Debi, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review. It's good to hear from you.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
OUCH!!!! The words you chose for this poem evoke a lot of emotion. The color scheme fits perfectly with the emotion. Oh I so wish I had a six left. This poem surely deserves it.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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OUCH!!!! The words you chose for this poem evoke a lot of emotion. The color scheme fits perfectly with the emotion. Oh I so wish I had a six left. This poem surely deserves it.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures explained the use of the lady's blue face and the rose in the water. Your words showed the anger in your voice. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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This was a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures explained the use of the lady's blue face and the rose in the water. Your words showed the anger in your voice. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a great weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Your words, like the musical notes, thrust themselves into the space occupied by your reader, releasing emotions too long held within. That is how this tanka feels and it succeeds. Grief often contains a feeling of rage that must surface in order to heal. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Your words, like the musical notes, thrust themselves into the space occupied by your reader, releasing emotions too long held within. That is how this tanka feels and it succeeds. Grief often contains a feeling of rage that must surface in order to heal. Well done!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem - EXCELLENT PICTURE PRESENTATION - WOW! - really nice - poem has a good syllable count and flow - Rhapsody in Blue - nice old song - remember it well - nice - a couple of suggestion -
the word 'thrust' describing - perhaps 'float'? (music floating through the air ) 'AND' rage - perhaps 'as' rage? Good Job - like the moving water!! AP
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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I like your tanka poem - EXCELLENT PICTURE PRESENTATION - WOW! - really nice - poem has a good syllable count and flow - Rhapsody in Blue - nice old song - remember it well - nice - a couple of suggestion -
the word 'thrust' describing - perhaps 'float'? (music floating through the air ) 'AND' rage - perhaps 'as' rage? Good Job - like the moving water!! AP
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
Blue surrounds this finely presented tanka with the ambience of a broken heart. Each word adds to the theme yet gently until just the last line.
A fine tanka that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Blue surrounds this finely presented tanka with the ambience of a broken heart. Each word adds to the theme yet gently until just the last line.
A fine tanka that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
I love the various tones of blue on this one that match the spooky woman in the picture. Nicely done.
Them as my Grandmother use to always say. "The only way to get over one man is under another!"
Oh my.
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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I love the various tones of blue on this one that match the spooky woman in the picture. Nicely done.
Them as my Grandmother use to always say. "The only way to get over one man is under another!"
Oh my.
D
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Oh, yes, you have a wise grandmother. It's the best way.
Thank you very much, Douglas. You are very kind.
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
words evoking the mood that your words portray... and of course, the title and driving force 'Rhapsody in blue' playing in my mind as I read your beautifully, yet sorrowful tanka poem.
I fell deeply into the ambiguity of the physical words... room and home and the added strength of the thrust to the musical notes suggesting the thoughts and feeling have no choice but to come and fill one with the rage and grief that plagues the mind in the down times of solitude.
I love the colour scheme and presentation of this exceptional piece of art... your words linger longer with music playing in one's mind. The music displaying the moody journey of up's, downs and possibility.
Ahhh Gershin... you've gotta love him!
With our thoughts we create...
reflective emotions.
Kindest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
words evoking the mood that your words portray... and of course, the title and driving force 'Rhapsody in blue' playing in my mind as I read your beautifully, yet sorrowful tanka poem.
I fell deeply into the ambiguity of the physical words... room and home and the added strength of the thrust to the musical notes suggesting the thoughts and feeling have no choice but to come and fill one with the rage and grief that plagues the mind in the down times of solitude.
I love the colour scheme and presentation of this exceptional piece of art... your words linger longer with music playing in one's mind. The music displaying the moody journey of up's, downs and possibility.
Ahhh Gershin... you've gotta love him!
With our thoughts we create...
reflective emotions.
Kindest regards,
James.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, James. I love your insightful feedback... itit'as if you were inside my head.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aw this is such a sad tanka
but really well-written
love the animated rippling water pic!!
a great job - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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aw this is such a sad tanka
but really well-written
love the animated rippling water pic!!
a great job - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate your kind review.
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