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Viewing comments for Chapter 147 "Sliding Into Your World"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sensual write portrayal the coming together of mind, body and soul here as these intimate lovers enjoy each other in every way, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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This is a sensual write portrayal the coming together of mind, body and soul here as these intimate lovers enjoy each other in every way, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Ginda Simpson
Love does feel like this when we meet that special someone. I love every word of this poem, that builds in tension/passion to explode into a million stars.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Love does feel like this when we meet that special someone. I love every word of this poem, that builds in tension/passion to explode into a million stars.
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Who am I to comment on something I am unfamiliar with? So I won't try for I know you are topnotch in most all of what you write.
Would joint universe mean the same as joined? i d k
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Who am I to comment on something I am unfamiliar with? So I won't try for I know you are topnotch in most all of what you write.
Would joint universe mean the same as joined? i d k
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Yes it means the same.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a good poem and it reminds me of my husband and me. We met and five months later were married. Now we're married over ten years and it's the best dream come true. I enjoyed your writing, descriptive words and the iimage supports your words.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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This is a good poem and it reminds me of my husband and me. We met and five months later were married. Now we're married over ten years and it's the best dream come true. I enjoyed your writing, descriptive words and the iimage supports your words.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Congratulation on a happy marriage :)
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This tanka is written exactly to a syllable count, and is a very sensual and beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it, Gypsy. Thanks for giving us the opportunity to read it Giddy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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This tanka is written exactly to a syllable count, and is a very sensual and beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it, Gypsy. Thanks for giving us the opportunity to read it Giddy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Comment from Douglas Goff
Hot, passionate, and sexy; yet classy. It is a talent to pull off that combination.
You are very talented, my friend. I read all of your works, but watch for the ones that really strike me so I can six star them. This is one of those home runs!
D
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hot, passionate, and sexy; yet classy. It is a talent to pull off that combination.
You are very talented, my friend. I read all of your works, but watch for the ones that really strike me so I can six star them. This is one of those home runs!
D
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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wow, thank you, Douglas, you honor me with your kind words. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and positive feedback.
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"learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist". - Picasso
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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Bravo! Gypsy , this is absolutely gorgeous.
Your words to picture everything compliments each other. I wish I had a six.
Nicely done my friend.
Kerry
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Bravo! Gypsy , this is absolutely gorgeous.
Your words to picture everything compliments each other. I wish I had a six.
Nicely done my friend.
Kerry
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :)
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is beautifully penned in soft and delicate images.
I especially liked:
we helplessly collide
and our joined universe
gives birth to a million stars
(Great imagery. I can see it.)
Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is beautifully penned in soft and delicate images.
I especially liked:
we helplessly collide
and our joined universe
gives birth to a million stars
(Great imagery. I can see it.)
Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Passionate and sensual description of the union as "my world slides into yours at mighty speed."
Two souls colliding in and giving birth to a million stars.
A powerful Tanka.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Passionate and sensual description of the union as "my world slides into yours at mighty speed."
Two souls colliding in and giving birth to a million stars.
A powerful Tanka.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :)
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Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Sliding into Your World, has the proper formatting and finds that two worlds have come together in a positive way with expectations of future success. Nice.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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This tanka, Sliding into Your World, has the proper formatting and finds that two worlds have come together in a positive way with expectations of future success. Nice.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :)
Gypsy hugs
