Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am pretty sure most of us, at least once, have lied on the grass and watched the amorous stars during a relationship. I can't image one has not. You're description was perfect.

stow me in your soul (WOW!!! a perfect line.)

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara, I am honored by your kind and positive review, it means a lot coming from you. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

read this three times... laugh/grass sound like near rhymes (could be just the long a - could be just me lol)
maybe... while on plush grass we lie ?

other than that, a great love tanka
cool pic of the couple lying on the grass, too

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

I get what you mean but unintentional near rhyme it's okay.

I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Such a romantic poem! I especially liked the "stow me in your soul" as the two lovers become one in their love. I also like the "amorous stars." Great use of alliteration and consonance!

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you, big sis. I wish you a wonderful and peaceful night.

Love,
MariVal ❤️

reply by lyenochka on 28-May-2023

Wish you the same! 💖🙏🎵💤💞

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Another romantic poem. This was full of the physical draw of love. The moment of oneness under the stars. Beautifully written. Thank you for posting. Have a great week. Gretchen

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a lovely night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Virtual six stars! Beautiful, beautiful. This is Julia romantic poem. Anyone who's loved knows the power of the night sky and feeling of being alone in the vast universe With only your Love.Yout poem and accompanying image perfectly represent Love.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a lovely night.

Gypsy hugs