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Gogyohka Poem

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Star Gazing

by Gypsy Blue Rose

stow me in your soul
murmuring love poems in my ear —
      I want to hear your heart laugh
     while we lie on plush grass
     looking up at amorous stars
 

 
 

 




Amorous = expressing love

GOGYOHKA is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

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Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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