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Little Cloud's Big Dream

Believing in yourself fulfills your dreams

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Comment from Aiona
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What a lovely children's story! It has a sweet ending, and it's even educational. Yes, there are so many types of clouds, and they're all necessary! I love the rainbow ending. It's perfect.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much for your kindness. I've finally returned home from traveling with the family and I need to get back into the swing of things. Appreciate the time and your thoughts. Wish you the best in the New Year.
    Smiles, Carol
reply by Aiona on 07-Jan-2025
    Happy New Year to you too! And I understand about the writing. If I don't write regularly, I get irritable. I have to get my thoughts down on paper. I'm the only one in my family who writes..... I don't know why!
Comment from pome lover
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a cute and meaningful story for children - grown-ups, too, really.
A gentle story showing children that everyone has a purpose no matter their size. Also positive thinking - learning to be content with who you are and what you can do. Nicely done.
Katharine

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
    Thanks, Katharine...I didn't think I would enjoy writing these little stories for children but actually it has become quite fun. I might write a few more once I get settled back home. Traveling was fun but returning home has its problems.
    Smiles, Carol
reply by pome lover on 06-Jan-2025
    I wrote for children before my granddaughter grew up. Now I have fun writing for us. :)
    But writing stories for kids IS fun. Enjoy.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Well, my dear, you have out done yourself in the cute names for this piece. Read it to my ten-year-old tonight before bed and she loved it!

What more success do you need than that?
Blessings.
Douglas

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
    Oh how wonderful! I am thrilled that you read my story to her and that she loved the story. That's worth everything to me. Thank you so much!
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
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Carol I loved this children's story. Morgan and I used to watch the clouds and imagine animals in them. One day there were all kinds of clouds, wispy, puffy, long skinny and big fat funny looking ones. She said: "Grandma, I think the baby angels are learning to paint clouds today". How she would have loved this story. Esther

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
    Oh, I am so happy that I might have given you just a moment to remember those awesome times and how you were blessed with Morgan's love and innocence. Thank you so much, Esther.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
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You'd better be careful about what names you use in your stories. You might have a few people on your case for promoting or trying to create sympathy for Sean Diddy Combs, "Puffy." LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    You can tell how far out of it I am...until you mentioned it, I would never have thought about it. My bad!
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, we all have a purpose and all are needed. This is a wonderful story with a perfect message for all. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    Writing these short stories with lessons within them seemed so out of my realm when I started, but after the Christmas ones, it's begun to seem easier and more natural. Thank you for enjoying them.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, we all have a purpose and all are needed. This is a wonderful story with a perfect message for all. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    This is a repeat but I will say thank you once again for all the extra work and time you put into my writing.
    Hugs, Carol
Comment from Harry Craft
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Congratulations Carol. I knew you were a great writer! This poem is so cute! I really like this one too! Keep up the great work and keep writing. I will read when I get a chance!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    Nice to hear from you, Harry. Thanks for stopping by to read this bit of fluff. Been writing some children's stories plus the ghost crime story and it's been fun. Thanks for enjoying.
    Smiles, Carol
reply by Harry Craft on 03-Jan-2025
    Well, it was really good! If you can write stories - you can write poetry too lol!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a loveky story to start your journy in the shorties! I love this with the moral that small and soft are just as important as big and brash. I'd rather be Puffy, he makes people smile. Well done, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    I'd rather be Puffy too. He gets to hang out with rainbows and not grouchy old storm clouds. LOL Thanks as always for enjoying the shortie.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
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I always like the messages in your stories, Carol, and you can really see how your characters grow and change by the end which is what makes your writing really entertaining. I really enjoyed reading this piece.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    This is something new for me but I am enjoying the little lessons and I hope maybe someday I can find someone to illustrate the for me. I think that would be so much fun.
    Smiles, Carol