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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A wonderful free verse to a friend who is there through all of life: the good and the bad! ;) Like the flow of this free verse offering, Gypsy... thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
    Thank you, 😊

    Gypsy
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
    Thank you, 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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This is a beautiful poem. I like the words you use., so heartfelt and have such meaning. The pictures are a good choice for your words. Great job.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This beautiful presentation only compliments this wonderful poem. The laughter and love, one can't get any better than that. Your talent has hit a new level this poem.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from royowen
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As always your intricate writing has to draw attention for its beautiful language, and the beautiful way of presenting your work, as always this follows your great narrative, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Roy

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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WOW! i loved this! excellent imagery throughout
but this is my fave. . .

watering a thirsty soul
lost in a desert of doubt
sowing seeds of love
passion flourishing
in gardens of delight...

a great poem with smooth flow
and awesome presentation with
the reds and orange colours

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much 😊 for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Marival
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi MariVal.
This is a good free verse that looks like about the power of laughter in bringing about love. You chose wonderful artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a very good poem.
-Each verse creates a very good word picture
about a relationship, beginning with the first first.
-My favorite verse is the second one
with the bird and the ray of light,
and the concluding line about
"singing to the Tree of Life."
-A very good concluding verse
that ties the whole poem together.
-Very well done.
-Hope you have a good day and week ahead.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Jan-2025
    You are very welcome for the stars and review, Gypsy.
Comment from June Sargent
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I loved the imagery in this free verse. The tiny seeds of love sown flourished into a garden of delights. It is the little things that count in maintaining a lasting relationship. Beautiful!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Hi Gypsy,
I am so in awe of your talent not just for poetry but for combining colours, designs and emotions so perfectly.
I am captivated by your design and presentation.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Wow, you grabbed me from the first words. Your contagious laughter watered my thirsty soul lost in a desert of doubt is the most beautiful and romantic thing I have ever heard or read in my life. I can hear the laughter and feel the thirst as it drew me in to read further about the Tree of Life and the Garden of Delights.
Hold onto that thirst, my friend! Your love will be quenched with the romance you long to have in your life.
Always your friend,
Jesse

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Jesse James Doty on 12-Jan-2025
    You're welcome, my friend.
    I hope you are safe from the fires.
    Let me know if there is anything I can do for you.
    Thanks for the hugs.
    Jesse