Joyous Vibes.
Happy heart, smiles, okay!2 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
The words, "Happy hearts," let me know I would enjoy this poem. It is inspiring and uplifting as you mention light for dark times. Your words flow smoothly and deliver a calming message. Best wishes in the contest.
You might go to FanArtReview and add a picture of a flower or something cheerful to add to the reader's experience.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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The words, "Happy hearts," let me know I would enjoy this poem. It is inspiring and uplifting as you mention light for dark times. Your words flow smoothly and deliver a calming message. Best wishes in the contest.
You might go to FanArtReview and add a picture of a flower or something cheerful to add to the reader's experience.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thanks for feedback.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is avgoid poem. I thought it has time be ine sentence only, but that was a different contest. I think this is cheery with good rhyming too. A photo image would also bring it to life.
Best wishes,
.Alex
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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This is avgoid poem. I thought it has time be ine sentence only, but that was a different contest. I think this is cheery with good rhyming too. A photo image would also bring it to life.
Best wishes,
.Alex
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thanks for feedback.
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You're welcome.
