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Snowdrops

Each Spring, the advance guard of resurgent Nature

4 total reviews 
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I like the idea of this beautiful little flower "thrusting" through the frozen ground to "assert" itself in all its glory. An excellent tribute to the power of nature in the face of adversity. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
    Thanks, Debbie.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a very lovely Cinquain poem. It has all the elements for this style of poem. It is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.

Good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Cecilia.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 27-Jan-2025
    You're welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-Good descriptive words get
our attention at the beginning.
-You continue that with the
"adventurous green shoots."
-Very good closing lines
with the addition of personification.
-A good entry; good luck!!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
    Thank you.
reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Jan-2025
    You are welcome.
Comment from zanya
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Yes roll on Spring and here we have a wonderful reminder that the hardy snowdrop is pushing upwards towards the extra light of Spring days - a great pic to illustrate

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
    Thank you.