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Sea Song

Cinquain

4 total reviews 
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
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Great entry for Cinquain poetry contest. With limited words, the author was able to covey the beauty of the calm ocean. This poem transports me to the beach on this cold morning. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a beautiful Cinquain poem. It has all the elements. It is well organized and flows nicely.The picture chose compliments the poem well.


Good luck in the contest

Cecilia


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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    Thank you
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 27-Jan-2025
    You're welcome
Comment from zanya
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The sea mesmerises us with its many and varied characteristics and nuances of color as celebrated here in this Cinquain and a beautiful pic to illustrate,

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Exceptional
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Very beautiful poem, and you made cute use a colors and bring the ocean close to our hearts by using a very beautiful personification: "Ocean,

salt water, blue,

gentle waves move, linger,

soothing sounds whisper through sea air

to shore." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
    Thank you