My Love Hate Plate
A bite of shame3 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Well of course, but we all have sometimes this sensation that we eat too much and because of this we get into self-doubt and blame it on the plate:) I am okay with my weight, I could do better, but what is the point of complaining. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Well of course, but we all have sometimes this sensation that we eat too much and because of this we get into self-doubt and blame it on the plate:) I am okay with my weight, I could do better, but what is the point of complaining. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Oh yes, I feel like eating in moderation most of the time is what's best, there are times where you just want to indulge.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear this girl's eating is out of hand and she could have a weight problem on the horizon. I enjoyed your fun post for the contest and this is a serious problem in today's society. Overeating can cause many associated health problems, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Oh dear this girl's eating is out of hand and she could have a weight problem on the horizon. I enjoyed your fun post for the contest and this is a serious problem in today's society. Overeating can cause many associated health problems, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Hopefully that girl will gain self control. Thank you for the review!
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. Good solid rhyme scheme and brief yet understandable poetic tale. I would suggest, perhaps in the author's notes, placing the definition for: Skort. I don't think most men will know what that is. You don't want them pausing to look it up.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Very nice. Good solid rhyme scheme and brief yet understandable poetic tale. I would suggest, perhaps in the author's notes, placing the definition for: Skort. I don't think most men will know what that is. You don't want them pausing to look it up.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2025
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Good idea! I meant to do that when I thought about it this morning. When I first thought of this poem.
Thank you
