Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello. I hope you are enjoying a lovely afternoon. Your cat poem is meaningful and a bit sad... I would mention that the endings do not rhyme as they should... cat, sad, mad. Perhaps... sad, feral cosmic cat mad lad... or some such wording. Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025

hmm I will revise it

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-You have a good image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the imagery.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You create a good word picture of the "feral cat."
-Very good rhyming words.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025

thanks I just revised it

reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Feb-2025

You did fine and have a new review. You need to go below your picture in the text box and delete this: "sad, feral cosmic cat mad lad..." The committee will count it as part of the poem.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, cats are mystical at times, they are determined, independent creatures and they also have a soft side and we love their company, the madder the better I say, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025

thanks a lot