Shark
1-6-1 poem2 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your words are vivid and capture the predatory nature of the shark. Excellent 1-6-1 form and use of words to create a clear picture of nature. Your middle line is so true, a shark's bite is much worse than it's bark.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Your words are vivid and capture the predatory nature of the shark. Excellent 1-6-1 form and use of words to create a clear picture of nature. Your middle line is so true, a shark's bite is much worse than it's bark.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Thank you dear mermaids <3
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a scary picture and even more scary words. I remember when JAWS the movie came out and it terrified everybody as we didn't realise how destructive sharks can be to humans when they are hungry, this poem packs a mighty punch, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Ha ha ha, this is a scary picture and even more scary words. I remember when JAWS the movie came out and it terrified everybody as we didn't realise how destructive sharks can be to humans when they are hungry, this poem packs a mighty punch, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Thank you dear Dolly <3
