Coming Out Party
They must be careful in the sun.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem! The short lines give it a sense of movement. Just like the squirming worms! I love how you captured that sneaky feeling with such few words. Keep up the awesome work!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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I really enjoyed your poem! The short lines give it a sense of movement. Just like the squirming worms! I love how you captured that sneaky feeling with such few words. Keep up the awesome work!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Thank you, sir, for the encouraging feedback.
Comment from mermaids
I think even worms deserve a poem. They are a part of nature. Excellent 1-6-1 poem that gives a voice to a voiceless being. This is the first poem I have read about worms.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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I think even worms deserve a poem. They are a part of nature. Excellent 1-6-1 poem that gives a voice to a voiceless being. This is the first poem I have read about worms.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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It is also the first poem I wrote about worms. They are interesting creatures who mostly live in a world of their own. Thanks for the read and feedback. Don't mermaids also have a world of their own?
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Haha! I suppose mermaids do live in a world of their own. Elaine
