Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Wow! I don't think any can beat your rhyming skill here! Skilfully done to illustrate the speed and dexterity of this killer frog's penchant for that "spry fly." Memorable and well crafted. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025

Many thanks, Debbie.

Comment from Mrs Anna Howard

Excellent

Haha! How cute! And yet, necessary deadly for survival. Excellent entry for 1-6-1 contest. I really enjoy reading and reviewing this.Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025

Many thanks.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is playful and fun. It is perfect with the image you shared here of the frog and fly! "My eye can spy a spry fly" is a clever line that really captures the quickness of the fly, and "'Bye!" is a surprising way to end it -
almost like the frog's victory in a single gulp! Keep it up - it's a charming little poem!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025

Thanks, Michael.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Haha Short but sweet. Much! Gotta go! This is cute and an excellent use of the syllables and rhyming. I enjoyed reading this. Your presentation is colorful abd perfectly supports your words

Alex. :)

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025

Thanks, Alex.