Hot Shot
a1-6-1 poem6 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have three votes.
They are nicknamed the tasers of the Amazon. Their electric shock can even kill medium caimans.
It is certainly the real deal and it's best not to mess with them.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025
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Ciao poet, you now have three votes.
They are nicknamed the tasers of the Amazon. Their electric shock can even kill medium caimans.
It is certainly the real deal and it's best not to mess with them.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much Franca!
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ooopppss I meant tasers not teaser. (biggrin)
I'm sure I made you laugh.
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Ha-ha! They are a real deal indeed! I love this. It's cute and funny, and the picture that goes with it just completes the poem. I do not dare to suggest any change as this is well written already. Good 1-6-1 entry and best wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Ha-ha! They are a real deal indeed! I love this. It's cute and funny, and the picture that goes with it just completes the poem. I do not dare to suggest any change as this is well written already. Good 1-6-1 entry and best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Great offering for this limited form contest... love the choice of your subject... reelly! ;) :) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Great offering for this limited form contest... love the choice of your subject... reelly! ;) :) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Haha, so fun Yvette. Thank you. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a powerful and clever post for the contest and I have been enjoying reading all these entries. Your is especially electrifying, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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This is a powerful and clever post for the contest and I have been enjoying reading all these entries. Your is especially electrifying, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Haha. Thanks Dolly ;)
Comment from royowen
I haven't seen one of these one six one poems for awhile, I can see you've met all the requirements of this contest, beautifully written, they say one can get a shot from them, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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I haven't seen one of these one six one poems for awhile, I can see you've met all the requirements of this contest, beautifully written, they say one can get a shot from them, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Thanks Roy!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Eel - deal - real, this is such a thoughtful poem, and I would add jokingly of course, if you got to close, you might experience the real deal, so chill:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Eel - deal - real, this is such a thoughtful poem, and I would add jokingly of course, if you got to close, you might experience the real deal, so chill:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Thank you Iza!
