Lost Sleep
A smile makes it all worth it.3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
What a cute one-line poem. It is the embodiment of love. I like that you don't initially know who "They" is, but even without the picture -- which is a perfect choice also -- the last part of the poem makes it obvious who the subject of the poem is about!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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What a cute one-line poem. It is the embodiment of love. I like that you don't initially know who "They" is, but even without the picture -- which is a perfect choice also -- the last part of the poem makes it obvious who the subject of the poem is about!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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Again, thanks for the read and the six star honor. Appreciated.
Comment from shelley kaye
They cause sleepless nights but their baby smiles make it all worth it.
such a sweet one-liner
and it is very true, too
one spag (i think)
their baby smiles <-- should this be "their baby's smiles"?
other than that, a great 1 line poem
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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They cause sleepless nights but their baby smiles make it all worth it.
such a sweet one-liner
and it is very true, too
one spag (i think)
their baby smiles <-- should this be "their baby's smiles"?
other than that, a great 1 line poem
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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Not sure about using the possessive. But I will check. Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are so right, I never minded getting up to my babies as I always loved the cuddles! I enjoyed your endearing words here for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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You are so right, I never minded getting up to my babies as I always loved the cuddles! I enjoyed your endearing words here for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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Thanks for the review. xxx
