Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

This is a great one line poem. That one line pretty much sums up everything very efficiently. The picture you chose for this poem is great.

Well done and good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025

Thank you, Cecilia.

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 06-Feb-2025

You're welcome

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh how I wish I could do this! Ha ha ha, your words made me smile here as we can levitate the mind up towards the stars if we concentrate hard enough, a fun post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025

Thanks, Dolly.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

haha, I love the vibe! Great job with just one line. You've got a cool flow going with those words. It feels like you're encouraging a shift in mindset. You're creating something fun and interesting here.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025

Cheers, Michael.