2025 Favorite Poems
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11 total reviews
Comment from teafor2
Gypsy, what an enthralling and hyperbole laden, personified professing of
adoration and captivation by this protagonist for the object of their affections...Title, picture, theme, tone and vivid expressions all complement each sentiment voiced for quested Valentine. teafor2
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Gypsy, what an enthralling and hyperbole laden, personified professing of
adoration and captivation by this protagonist for the object of their affections...Title, picture, theme, tone and vivid expressions all complement each sentiment voiced for quested Valentine. teafor2
Comment Written 16-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much, teafor2
Gypsy 😊
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You've brought all of nature into this very romantic poem. I could feel the passion of the love as I read. This is a perfect Valentine Poem. It should be in a contest. You were at your best when you wrote this poem.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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You've brought all of nature into this very romantic poem. I could feel the passion of the love as I read. This is a perfect Valentine Poem. It should be in a contest. You were at your best when you wrote this poem.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, You Are My Valentine, presented with six couplets, finds in all the mysteries of nature the connections felt between two or more who share the gift of love.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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This free verse, You Are My Valentine, presented with six couplets, finds in all the mysteries of nature the connections felt between two or more who share the gift of love.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Romantic words of the lover to the loved. These verese conjure up warm and close feelings and expressions of love. Such is the ambiance of Valentines. Thank you fir sharing this beautiful poem.
RJ
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Romantic words of the lover to the loved. These verese conjure up warm and close feelings and expressions of love. Such is the ambiance of Valentines. Thank you fir sharing this beautiful poem.
RJ
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Your bring the scene to life with lines like "handsome willow trees dance with the wind." Great use of personification. "Where the mountains meet the sky" makes me think of the romance between heaven and earth. There's love everywhere!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Your bring the scene to life with lines like "handsome willow trees dance with the wind." Great use of personification. "Where the mountains meet the sky" makes me think of the romance between heaven and earth. There's love everywhere!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Thank you, Big Sister. I'm happy that you like it.
Love,
MariVal ❤️
Comment from kahpot
I love the start as your valentine outshines nature, what a wonderful way of expressing your feelings, and then the comparisons to "shaking their love-laden branches
salaciously dipping into the stream" beautifully written and presented,
Happy Valentines to you Marival****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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I love the start as your valentine outshines nature, what a wonderful way of expressing your feelings, and then the comparisons to "shaking their love-laden branches
salaciously dipping into the stream" beautifully written and presented,
Happy Valentines to you Marival****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much, kym. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is absolutely enchanting! The way you wrote it makes everything feel so alive and full of emotion. I love how you weave romance into the scenery. Especially with that last line. Such a lovely Valentine's poem!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Your poem is absolutely enchanting! The way you wrote it makes everything feel so alive and full of emotion. I love how you weave romance into the scenery. Especially with that last line. Such a lovely Valentine's poem!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much
Have a wonderful
weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written Valentine's Day poem, this is as good a poem as I've ever read, such a beauty, and a wonderfully worded work, language rich and passionate, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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A beautifully written Valentine's Day poem, this is as good a poem as I've ever read, such a beauty, and a wonderfully worded work, language rich and passionate, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much
Have a wonderful
weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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You too
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
You probably weren't talking to me but with a poem like that I would be your Valentine! Love the image and the text colors. All romance. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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You probably weren't talking to me but with a poem like that I would be your Valentine! Love the image and the text colors. All romance. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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Hahaha I'm honored, you would make a wonderful valentine.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
wow, i love these two lines...
shaking their love-laden branches
salaciously dipping into the stream
the image of willow trees dipping their branches into a stream is very cool...
smooth flow and line connection
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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wow, i love these two lines...
shaking their love-laden branches
salaciously dipping into the stream
the image of willow trees dipping their branches into a stream is very cool...
smooth flow and line connection
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
