Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job with your humor on the frustrations of flying and all those ridiculous hidden costs! If it were only possible to just buy a plane but that has its risks, too. And I wouldn't fly it. But I know you would!
Congratulations on your second place win!!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025

Thanks for your review, lyenochka!! Congratulations to you too!

Comment from Kirsten Shonle

Excellent

Ha ha. Love the ending. It is so true about airlines they advertise one price and it turns out to be a lot more. Totally relatable. The dialogue is great.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025

Thanks for your review, Kirsten. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is so delightful and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It seems that is the way that things are going with the airlines these days they charge you for everything you need on the flight and things it should not be charged for next thing you know that'll be charging for you for the air you breathe. Patricia

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025

Thank you for your review, Patricia. Well, it is recycled air! Yeah, I guess they ARE charging for the air you breathe!!! LOL!

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

"Not even looking at him, the Teller slides the card to her and" this line made me stumble, "her" sounds like there is a third person, so many will relate to this story, it is so hard to get what we want or enticed to try now a days, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025

Thanks! Yeah, I stumbled over that too. I changed it just now.