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L in the Alphabet Soup

Lord Bubbles and Lady Luna

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Comment from Karen Cherry
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That was so sweet it must have calories. I sent you some pictures from my collections you might could use. I haven't used them before. When I can't sit and write, sometimes I troll for pictures. You write so much I thought maybe you might run out. Karen

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
    Thanks so much for taking the time to read and enjoy my Alphabet Soup stories. I apprecite it so much as always.
    Smiles, Carol
reply by Karen Cherry on 04-Apr-2025
    :-)
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Carol,

What a great little story. It's amazing how meeting one new friend can change everything. Now the fish have friends and the little girls can play together too.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    And I have a special friend in you, Sis. All because of writing and sharing our stories. Thank you for always having my back and being here.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a cute story. Of course, kids talk to their goldfish. I had a tank in my classroom, and everyone talked to the fish! Two little fixes: 'He'd dart through (it), float to the top...'
'I think Sprinkle(s) might need a friend, too.'
Kids will like this story of friendship -- for both the fish and the humans.
Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by Carol Clark2 on 02-Apr-2025
    I'm always happy to review your writing. I might not get to comment on everything you write because I'm trying to finish writing a study guide in the next month.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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How incredibly cute. Lord Bubbles is a much better name that Cat Food, which is what my kids named our last goldfish. Children are blessings.

Thanks for sharing. You have a fantastically creative mind!
Douglas

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
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Beautiful, Carol. Everyone needs someone to talk to, and I guess even fish can be lonely for their own kind. Two, no three, problems solved. Each of the fish has a friend, and the two girls now have each other as friends. And a good choice of name for that second new fish!
Wendy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is such a sweet story about friendship and little fishes. Lyla worried about her fish and Melonie worried about her fish. Friends for the fishes turned out to be new friends for the girls.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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"It wasn't flashy or fancy. It was just curious. It swam up close, staring at her through the glass, then zoomed in a perfect circle. She did it over and over again.

Lyla smiled, having made her decision. "That one." You know, this is how I choose my Pisa, my first Canadian cat. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Every little fish needs a lady fish or playmate. And I'm talking about someone to play with, and a playmate like those on the calendars. :-) Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Noreen Bernardo
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This is such a sweet and fun story. It is full of creativity and wonderful imagination and, of course, a happy ending. I enjoyed the read. My grandkids would love it as well! Good job!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
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What a lovely story Carol, oh yes indeed, we all need friends, when I was a boy, in the Christmas holidays, after the festivities were over, I read my books and comics, I guess that's where my love of writing was born I think, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by royowen on 02-Apr-2025
    Most welcome