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Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces

Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Why Must I Suffer?"
A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith

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Comment from sara-beth
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I thought this was very well written. Soul searching and passionate; you built up the feeling of sorrow, and then offered advice (to yourself), and good advice at that. Very good job!

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2008

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
    Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece, it is much appreciated.
    Be blessed and stay safe
    GTG
Comment from chaswriter
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Blue-Stubby - I am not into the glory of God poems or stories but I did like the message that you are telling in your poem and questions you ask. The pace of the read is a little ragged but that adds to its charm. Enjoyed it. Charlie.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2008

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
    Well... I am honored that you would review this work through a poetic perspective, unbiased. Thank you for your honest effort in reviewing this piece, it is much appreciated. This was pure freeform and the ragged charm was unintentional. LOL... with a smile.
    Be blessed and stay safe
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
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this is a very good poem, the words are deep and meaningful and the flow is good. it is well presented and well edited with no adjustments needed

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2008

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
    A "Well of Gold" reviews. Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece, it is much appreciated.