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A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Lotus Moon

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
lotus moon,
my companion on this cold night,
melts into a sea of time
as aloof waves come and go
like your treacherous love




 




The new moon in June is known in some cultures as 'The Lotus Moon'

Tanka is mostly written by women. These poetesses inspire me to write tanka poems:

Ono no Komachi ( 825 - 900) was a Japanese tanka poet, one of the six best poets of the early Heian period. She was renowned for her unusual beauty. Wikipedia

Izumi Shikibu ( born in 976 ) is a member of the Thirty-six Medieval Poetry Immortals. She "is considered the greatest woman poet of the Heian period. Wikipedia

Murasaki Shikibu "Lady Murasaki"; (973 -1025) was a Japanese poet and lady-in-waiting at the Imperial court. She is widely considered to be one of the world's first novels, written in Japanese between about 1000 and 1012. Wikipedia

Yosano Akiko (1878 - 1942) was a Japanese poet, pioneering feminist, pacifist, and social reformer, She is one of the most noted, and most controversial, post-classical woman poets of Japan. Wikipedia

TANKA is a Japanese poetic form that originated in Japan's Imperial Court, where the men and women engaged in courtship would exchange tanka after an intimate night. This poetic form was created 1,200 years ago. FORM: It's written in a concise manner of 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS because Japanese and English syllables are different. Personification, metaphor, and simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary and it never rhymes. click here if you want to see tanka rules - click here if you want to see modern tanka examples - click here to read Tanka Society of America

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