Romance Poetry posted March 11, 2024 Chapters:  ...23 24 -25- 26... 


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Somonka Poem

A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry

~ I Love You ~

by Gypsy Blue Rose


first stanza is the woman's poem, the second is the man's response

I love you,

your touch ignites

   a fire inside—

in remembrance of last night

I daydreamed all-day
 


I love you,

    you bring out the best in me—

I yearn to be

with you tonight to show you

how much you turn me on
 
 
 
 




The Somonka, is a Japanese verse of two unrhymed poems (5/7/5/7/7 - 5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS exchanged between lovers in a statement and response form. The earliest Somonkas can be found as far back as the 1st century AD. click here, if you like, for more information ; . click here if you want to read more

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. Gypsy Blue Rose All rights reserved. Registered copyright with FanStory.
Gypsy Blue Rose has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.