Romance Poetry posted March 23, 2024 Chapters: Prologue -1- 2... 


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Unbearable

by Gypsy Blue Rose


poem in black font in my author notes

 

I learned long ago

it’s true what they say

about “a broken heart”

or “a heartache”

 

it’s more than just words

it does hurt like hell

as a dagger through the chest

it’s an unbearable pain

 

I sit with my companion

the lonesome moon

waiting for the sun

to thrust the night away

 

I know how it feels

when the heart breaks

 

 

 



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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. It was inspired by Chilian poet, Pablo Neruda.

THE POEM IN BLACK FONT

I learned long ago
it's true what they say
about 'a broken heart'
or a 'heartache'
it's more than just words
it does hurt like a dagger
through the chest
it's an unbearable pain
I sit with my companion
the lonesome daybreak
waiting for the sun
to thrust the moon away
I know how it feels
when the heart breaks

Gypsy

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