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Senryu Suite (rules in author notes)
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You Taste Like Cinnamon Sugar

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Presentation and Poem by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/10/24

 

the moon sits on fire 

on the mountain

     where fierce wolves howl      

above a cloudless sky

has embers left behind  

by the burning sun

    as your piercing eyes     

the color of midnight rain

wash over me

 

your sand color skin 

tastes like cinnamon sugar

and smells like myrrh

and a wild uproar erupts 

inside my wistful heart 

where your Spirit dwells

 

 





"Do you not know that you are a temple of God and that the Spirit of God dwells in you?" - 1 Corinthians 3:16

All senryu stanzas are 17 syllables or less.

SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo).
the haiku foundation senryu rules

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. The presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/10/24


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