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Modern Tanka (rules in author notes)
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* My Beloved *

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Happy Valentine's Day

 my beloved,

    calls me Little Thunder—

b e c a u s e     h e     l i s t e n s 

to me talking in my sleep

when my wishful heart rumbles

 





Inspired by, "The Book of Longings" - Sue Monk Kidd, author

Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem with 31 syllables arranged in five lines; English tanka is 31 syllables or LESS because Japanese and English syllables are different. Tanka originated in the 6th century at the Japanese Imperial Court where lovers exchanged tanka poems for each other after a night of passionate lovemaking. With contemporary tanka the topic varies.
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. The presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 2/14/25
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